Nice, really enjoying how much character you bring to Xoe...being this total jerk like character, but can tell she is good deep down. Love the reference to Majesta, whom can be glad she found an apprentice who, dispute being a street thief, and can get impulsive in her actions, does have a pure soul. Majesta may have many that wet all dark side on her, and she may have known was a possibility, but she does feel she had a chance to turn to help them be good and do good. Even can see the future, the future isnt set in stone, and so is a gamble if they fall from grace....but the success of Harvest and others, she carries on....love her being referred to as some interdimensional cop...never thought about it that way, but yeah is kinda like that. Just after learning from Historia, and her life growing up, she couldn't just sir and watch injustice being done, and even cant be everywhere, she does what she can to least keep things in balance.

Yes, quite enjoyed the story, just sa thing I needed too to make me smile and read. Get some ideas, but sometimes have trouble articulating them in written word.

I'm glad you're enjoying this so far. I especially liked showing Xoe's not a complete jerk when she showed some sympathy and honest-to-God kindness towards Rio in the last story I wrote.

Well, I kind of thought of Majesta as someone who tries to maintain the balance between good and evil, even if it means sending in those who might not be keen on going on these sorts of insane quests (Xoe, for one example). Xoe just thinks of her as some interdimensional cop.