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The Time Lord Pt. 1
by Gabriel-Fawkes
Wacky fuzzball folf
19 years ago
Yeah I finished the first part of a series called "The Time Lord", Yes its a referance to Doctor Who its a fanfic I wrote over the passed few weeks
A Little bit of a heads up I threw in some Japanese slang so don't worry If a few words get spell check warnings.
If you think I need to work on my writing skills go right ahead and tell me, I like to know what I could do better.
A Little bit of a heads up I threw in some Japanese slang so don't worry If a few words get spell check warnings.
If you think I need to work on my writing skills go right ahead and tell me, I like to know what I could do better.
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verm
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Only complaint would be that there were spelling & grammar errors, and some of the text did clash in such a manner that it was hard to tell who was saying what. Other than that, it was rather entertaining. If the idea that you had for Gabriel & Gabrielle is what I think it is, then you're using a similar idea of what I came up with back in 1995.
Gabriel-Fawkes
~gabriel-fawkes
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yeah I admit I failed Grammar in High school and I've always been a crappy spell, and what pray tell was your idea.
verm
~verm
More than one Entity in a single body. The difference is that in my creation of that scenario, there were 5 in one and the 4 were separated from the originator into their own entities. In the way you have your creation of the Gabs, I'd say that you went for either a similar form of mine, separation of mentality or twins that were in one body
Gabriel-Fawkes
~gabriel-fawkes
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I haven't completely Fleshed the whole twin/clone thing yet, but I can say it will be part of the story later on.
