nice instrumntal

Oh man, I really love the transfer from the beginning, I can really feel that first blast on Ascalon with that. Also I REALLY enjoy 2:34, it's like a horribly fucked up carnival and I've ALWAYS had a love for dark carnival style. Something about it really pulls things together. And how it slows down for a moment after the chaos and builds up slowly, I do feel that build up of his mind just snapping.
I think there's only one small thing, that build up at the end, I think it might go nicely with just an all out hack and slash feel, sort of that final 'snap' and desperation before slowing down and leaving him with nothing but his broken mind.

This is really epic though, I'm VERY impressed 0 A0 <3

You might want to check out the real version. The ending there is a lot more powerful. :3

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3840123

However, I can whip up a better outro. Would you just like me to add something to it or revise it completely?

Gimme a bit, I'm going to compare these two now~ I'm having a lot of fun listening to these

Alright, after listening to both, I'm thinking either an addition of an all out chaotic clash, maybe cut it in to a calmer section.
Hm, if it's not too much, perhaps a revamped ending. There's a small moment of calm in the comic after the destruction, followed by just the sudden murder of Talos, where perhaps a strong note could be taken for a bit, something that could show fear perhaps and a build up to desperation before going all out insane. Then the slow down and broken feeling at the very end, that would make it perfect.
Hopefully it's not too much though O AO It's all really great up to 3:26, after that is where the build up feels a little under played
You're amazing for doing this all so quickly though, wow

Whoa. Didn't expect you to want this many changes. T_T

Ah well! I'll get to work immediately.

Gah now I feel bad DX

Psf. Don't.

I wasn't actually sure about the last part myself.