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The following is a commissioned story 
Okamiiii featuring the Brave Police Squad, an anime I'd never heard of but seems cute tbh.
Here, GunMax, the most headstrong of the mech officers, decides that, specialty fuel or not, there's nothing his fuel tank can't handle. Three guesses as to how that goes for him.
CONTAINS THE FOLLOWING: BELLYACHE, BELLY RUBS, BLOATING, BURPING (LOTS AND LOTS, FAM), EMBARRASSMENT, FLUFF'N FEELS, HICCUPS, INDIGESTION, LIQUID GLUTTONY.
Original artwork here: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/37439304/
Okamiiii featuring the Brave Police Squad, an anime I'd never heard of but seems cute tbh. Here, GunMax, the most headstrong of the mech officers, decides that, specialty fuel or not, there's nothing his fuel tank can't handle. Three guesses as to how that goes for him.
CONTAINS THE FOLLOWING: BELLYACHE, BELLY RUBS, BLOATING, BURPING (LOTS AND LOTS, FAM), EMBARRASSMENT, FLUFF'N FEELS, HICCUPS, INDIGESTION, LIQUID GLUTTONY.
Original artwork here: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/37439304/
Category Story / Fat Furs
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 97px
File Size 145.8 kB
Listed in Folders
This was so friggin perfect and was just what I needing during this rough year. Sorry for the late comment, I have to let my excited thoughts stew.
I loved the new addition of the *GLUG GLUG* onomatopoeia lol rlly gave the image of Gunmax chugging down the swiped fuel with a very strong sense of ego-just perfect.
The build-up bloating is my favorite only second to the post-bloating indigestion. Oh boy, there sure was a hell alot of belchin here, good stuff!
Your writing is always top-notch imo but I definitely think you’ve improved QUITE a bit recently.
You nailed these characters‘ speech patterns despite there being no English dub to reference. It was all very natural sounding-Toudou’s dialogue was especially tender towards his robot son and I couldn’t be any happier about that -thank you!
Always a pleasure to get a commission from you!
I loved the new addition of the *GLUG GLUG* onomatopoeia lol rlly gave the image of Gunmax chugging down the swiped fuel with a very strong sense of ego-just perfect.
The build-up bloating is my favorite only second to the post-bloating indigestion. Oh boy, there sure was a hell alot of belchin here, good stuff!
Your writing is always top-notch imo but I definitely think you’ve improved QUITE a bit recently.
You nailed these characters‘ speech patterns despite there being no English dub to reference. It was all very natural sounding-Toudou’s dialogue was especially tender towards his robot son and I couldn’t be any happier about that -thank you!
Always a pleasure to get a commission from you!
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