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I know, I know, this is written as if I'm referring to humans, but use your imaginations? It's easier to write it like this and later change it to proper furry literature than it is to try and rewrite a furry story into a story acceptable to non-furs, and since I'm sharing this story with both... you get the idea.
So, reintroducing Niveus, Violet and Rose from Rose's perspective this time. I've got a new plan on how to write this, so... hopefully you'll all think it's as good as I hope it will be, when the perspective shift hits. As for this one, as always, critique is fantastic, praise is nice, and if you're here to troll or complain without doing anything productive then may I say "fuck you" ahead of time~!
For reference:
Rose - Fox - Silver fur, white at belly and fingertips
Niveus - Fox - Sand-colored fur, fades to silver at the belly and extremities
Violet - Fox - Silver fur, white at belly, right handpaw is black
So, reintroducing Niveus, Violet and Rose from Rose's perspective this time. I've got a new plan on how to write this, so... hopefully you'll all think it's as good as I hope it will be, when the perspective shift hits. As for this one, as always, critique is fantastic, praise is nice, and if you're here to troll or complain without doing anything productive then may I say "fuck you" ahead of time~!
For reference:
Rose - Fox - Silver fur, white at belly and fingertips
Niveus - Fox - Sand-colored fur, fades to silver at the belly and extremities
Violet - Fox - Silver fur, white at belly, right handpaw is black
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Vulpine (Other)
Size 120 x 112px
File Size 19 kB
Switching perspective is fine it all depends on balance and purpose of characterization. A lot of authors do it. As proper anthropomorphic literature not to speak things profanely a spade is a spade, I am demi edgy on the weird drawn conflicts of such definitions, it is what it is. It is description that helps bring worlds and characters to life, making their faces well known. Anthropomorphisim by context in general has a interesting effect on rhetorical presentation and psychological emotional response of a work far past the foundations of this most muddled fandom.
Yet again vibrate and beautiful. Well imageic scenes of emotion and girth. Something I could not ever do, for my works are of darkened things that cling to the senses in disparity to sensual worth. Keep up the masterful work.
Yet again vibrate and beautiful. Well imageic scenes of emotion and girth. Something I could not ever do, for my works are of darkened things that cling to the senses in disparity to sensual worth. Keep up the masterful work.
I've been wanting to do a family-type story for a long time...
Rose's character design, physically, is pretty much based off my Aki. in terms of character, I wanted the single beautiful woman who has eyes for no one but her kids, who she adores but doesn't spoil. I sort of want her to be the kind of person that some people think of as uppity, but in reality knows she'll never fall in love again. Kinda the holy grail kind of thing x3 Perfect but untouchable.
I wanted Niveus to be a little different, so that's where the sand colored fur and silver undertones come in, as well as a trait that I haven't introduced yet.. As for his attitude, imagine a mix of House and your average eight year old; he absolutely detests people, but adores his mother, though I will admit his relationship with his sister is going to be a lot more stable than most kids...
Violet, again, needed to be unique, but since she isn't the main focus of the story, I gave her the attitude that works great for a side character - a major math and science geek. You know, the one that's really really nice, but is misunderstood because she's so smart and because she can babble about both subjects nonstop. I'm not sure where the off-colored paw came from... probably the same spot that Kyle's 'suck but don't smoke' habit came from x3
Rose's character design, physically, is pretty much based off my Aki. in terms of character, I wanted the single beautiful woman who has eyes for no one but her kids, who she adores but doesn't spoil. I sort of want her to be the kind of person that some people think of as uppity, but in reality knows she'll never fall in love again. Kinda the holy grail kind of thing x3 Perfect but untouchable.
I wanted Niveus to be a little different, so that's where the sand colored fur and silver undertones come in, as well as a trait that I haven't introduced yet.. As for his attitude, imagine a mix of House and your average eight year old; he absolutely detests people, but adores his mother, though I will admit his relationship with his sister is going to be a lot more stable than most kids...
Violet, again, needed to be unique, but since she isn't the main focus of the story, I gave her the attitude that works great for a side character - a major math and science geek. You know, the one that's really really nice, but is misunderstood because she's so smart and because she can babble about both subjects nonstop. I'm not sure where the off-colored paw came from... probably the same spot that Kyle's 'suck but don't smoke' habit came from x3
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