Sweetness...

Oooh. . .

I'm still having problems controlling my anticipation of Burr's reaction to being a badgerlisk's daddy.

Someone should draw that offspring.

I've got pretty good ideas about that.

I like this, it's sort of silly in a way

Thanks!

Heh, its probably the same embarrassment men who lactate feel.

Hah! I never thought of that...very likely true.

Very nice. Also, perfect use of second person narration. Sure, most of it is in first person, but the rooster refers to the snake as "you". It's not: "I tell him this and this", but: "I tell you this and this", putting the reader into the snake's position. Rather working effect, I think.

Well written. Enjoyed this a lot. The snake and maybe even the rooster are going to have a surprise, am I right? Anyway, good work. Keep it up.

I'm glad you liked it! I'm a bit disappointed that it's so short...but it was hard to keep up that narration style.