Wow De-chavo.Your base lines remind me of my old style. Okay, I'll go off on a limb here and say that she's supposed to be hanging off a bed or something like that. With that one of the biggest things is that you would NOT see her belly at this angle (unless she is pregnant or is about to have her head on the floor). Another thing is the breasts. I see you have them as though they are part of the arm. Take a look at Okita's wedding Day. You see how I have the breast separate from the arm? She may also be able to help with the face. For the face, she looks like she has a rather flat face aside her muzzle. Her nose and mouth seem boxy, I would suggest rounding the muzzle out which will give her face a more natural look. Sorry if I seem rather harsh, but I can see you want to improve, so a good overall start to what I foresee as a wonderful piece of art.


Also I should have my build sheets up within the day. I'm in the final touches and will let you know once they are up. I hope they will help you out.

she's supposed to be laying on a bed, yeah. remove her belly, got it.
wouldn't her shoulders be visible from this angle? I'm not sure I understand what you want me to do with her breasts.
I'll try rounding her snout a bit too to see how that looks.

I'll do it tomorrow.

I'm just saying that you have her breast(her right one) connected to what would be the back of her arm. Again going back to the link in my other comment, you see how Okita Has a definite separation between her breast and and the back of her arm? that is what I meant by the issue with the breast. I would suggest that you bring the line for her right breast on closer to her head and also leave a space between the back of her arm and her edge of her breast. Again look at the link at Okita's left side. Her arm is in a similar position. Just flipped from what you have.

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3849806/

is this any better?
also, I appreciate your feedback

she's supposed to be laying on a bed, yeah. remove her belly, got it.
wouldn't her shoulders be visible from this angle? I'm not sure I understand what you want me to do with her breasts.
I'll try rounding her snout a bit too to see how that looks.

I'll do it tomorrow.

HummmmmmmmmThat's a new sexy interesting pose! HeeheGreatly done pose and pic! Great work!

thanks.

Your very welcome! ^v^ Heeehe!

I don't know, I'd say that her face is a bit too wide, other than that I can't see anything wrong.

I'll try shortening it a bit, could help a bit.¨
you looked at the changed one I uploaded? http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3849806/