I think the ending was a little abrupt. Aside from that it was very good. =)

I get people telling me that. I personally don't think it is. o.o

Maybe I should make the organ fade out. Hmm.

I see why the end doesn't sound finished to some! It sounded fine to me, but listening to it I see two things, first (technical problem) the moment you finish the organ part at the end, the file finishes, maybe a second of silence before the actual end of the file after the organ is allowed to naturally die out will ease the effect. Two, you have a good ending cadence, but the last two chords don't follow the resolution pattern, which is okay if you're used to more modern (avant-gardish) classics, but maybe having a stronger close will help, at 6 seconds before the end, that chord which feels like the soprano (as in voicing) line should move down to a dissonance, you go upwards to a less harsh dissonance, so the resolution is not as strong, which makes it sound unfinished~ Of course I can't be sure without seeing the notes, but that's what it sounds like to me.

Otherwise I liked this, very pleasing to listen to!

Thanks for the compliment/criticism~

As my album has already been bought (well, downloaded with a free coupon ._.), I'd rather not make any changes to it anymore. :3

Well, critique usually isn't for fixing what's there, but more for keeping in mind for other projects! Fade outs are a little sneaky (a bit like cheating your way out from an ending, not that I mind at all!), though I always like it when a piece ends naturally, I mean fade outs are impractical in real performances (last time I checked, anyway)

Well, the fade here actually has a meaning. It's supposed to symbolize a person's bad memories fading away and being replaced with good ones. :3

Fade outs are impractical in real performances, but I don't perform. It's a bit hard to play four instruments at the same time.

Oh, I meant fade outs, not general fades within a piece, those are cool and effective when used right!
Well, now that I think about it, using electric guitars, electric organs and no drums (at the end anyway), fade outs could be quite possible~

Wow, that's some candy for my ears. I like how the melody just carries your attention along, and the organ in the back gives it such a nice foundation... fantastic.

Thanks!

Be sure to listen to the whole album at http://atonium.net <3

Like what I'm hearing so far, so I bought it. I listened to Black panther, and that was enough to convince me. ^^ Can't wait to hear the rest.

Awesome! Thank you so much! <3

-) This was quiet melodic, and the ambient opening had me withing the first 10 seconds. It reminds me of something I might hear from Brian Eno, only darker and more progressive. The overdrive guitar in the beginning I felt sounded much to hollow, it needed a little bit more color into it, but not something quiet like a rainbow. (You better love my analogy or so help me god.) Of course, it cleans up, and then carries very well.

-) For placement, in my heart, I felt the ending to Fear 2 was nearly shouting at me. It has a good climactic feeling, with some tingling notions of dejections, or pine. With this being said, it was like candy to my ears. :D

Awesome! Thanks for the compliments/criticism. I've received criticism for the production here - and I admit that I'm not the best one. However, the part with the distorted guitar is supposed to feel a bit hollow as it fits in with the story of the song.

Be sure to listen to my album at http://atonium.net if you liked this song. <3

-) Ah, I see, well then my criticism was misplaced, in fact then, the guitar fit perfectly if that were the intention :D

-) Though, I think playing it in B-Minor would have sounded fantastic, it gives a great vibe of dark.

That gave me CHILLS, man.