I`m sure you`ve heard this before, but you need some speech bubbles or pointer lines. Just different colored text isn`t cutting it. The author guy and Dark Samus for instance are really hard to tell apart. Not to mention they`re both dark, so it`s bad contrast with the background.

As for the eh stuff, I`m not Canadian, nor have I been to Canadia (yes, I know how to spell it, that`s an in-joke) but I tend to say eh myself, so yeah eh. ^^ You got good content and funny dialogue. Just needs better text presentation.... eh.

Actually, you're the first person to tell me that. And I considered using things like speech bubbles when I first started this series but I decided I wanted to try a different kind of text presentation than the traditional kind. also, in some comics, sometimes there's barely enough room for the amount of text I'm using. Plus I made the first 24 comics when I was in junior high 7 or 8 years ago.