This has taken a big and unexpected turn

With possibly a much darker end to this scene

Yeah.

Arctic Fox: IMPOSSIBLE!! How is she not dead?

Dude, she still dead.

Does she look dead?

She doesn’t look dead, but I don’t buy that she’s in this cave, ALIVE

She might look alive, but Helena is Still dead as shit

Like shit? I think you should use your determinations better.

Fine, just remove shit, and leave that Helena is still dead, and add that this is a mind trick

Hell, he might not even be in the cave, and he’s still lying in the sand.

This is becoming a bit surreal, we no longer know how this started, maybe Teo never got up from the sand when trying to return home to see his wife, he would not even have met Seth, everything is confusing now, you have to see that it happens later.

plot twist and awesome page

The former I’ll have to disagree with you at this moment of time, the latter I totally agree with you.

Something tells me Teo's trippin'.

Or ripping

Unreal!

*slams fist on table* IMPOSSIBLE!!

What table. Do you think he’s still in that city he just left?

Totes unreal

“IT’S NOT TRUE. THAT’S IMPOSSIBLE”

Yeah, I feel like this is still suspect, like it’s a mirage or something.

It's a dream...

No shit

If this is true, then he killed those people for nothing

If this is an illusion, then that is especially sadistic

I’m leaning towards the latter, and the latter might be more darker than Teo just killing people, even if the “killed my molten gold” death scene is included.

There are people who think god hates them, well there’s some grounding for Seth hating Teo

And unfortunately, there might be a breaking point, with him really close to that point, and after that, not even a god he considers his friend (Kraso) could even save him.

No. This is delirium. Or Seth's sick idea of a joke.

No it’s manipulation on Seth’s part.

Oh...I hope Teo won't succumb the madness...

Too late!

As Shyamalan would say: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kdhhQhqi_AE

And four pages later, if I’m right I’ll type in “DOUBLE TWIST”.

And if I’m the first one to write the comment, I’ll also add “FIRST!!!!”

HI Helena

How’s heaven?

Is there a heaven?

Or are you at (insert Roman heaven) instead?

Did you get transferred?

Could you get transferred between heavens?

No, no Zeus. How you started it, your kind of on the right path.

Plus hoping that people are still alive is an awful idea, because those people would want you to keep on living, enjoying their life.

That’s why Teo’s story is tragic. That he doesn’t get over Helena’s death, and that consumes him till he stops being Teo, and starts becoming someone else.

A heartless mercenary, feared by everyone who calls the Sahara their home

We don't know how Teo reacts to seeing this.

Well, it’s a prediction.

You hold the answers to where Teo’s story is going

No, this story does not always have a script to follow.

Well, you have some ideas.

Whenever I write something, I ditch and add ideas all the time, but there’s are some ideas I like to keep set in stone, where I have the story go down

And where I have written is just what I think the story MIGHT go down.

You might have other ideas, and you might add new ones, just don’t contradict yourself to a point

You will have the answers to your questions shortly.

Yeah, it awesome

I see that I surprised the majority.

Hell, you even surprised me.

But, I don’t think the scene is going to end on a happy note.

His brother is wherever, Kraso is journeying with Anthony to lands unknown, and Helena is still dead.

I am amazed at your conviction.

Why thank you.

As I said, I might be wrong on where the comic would go, but I’m definite on that.

There not, this entire cave is a deception.

If I’m coming off like that, it wasn't intentional.

I wish you could double upload with this comic.

Do you mean upload two pages at once?

Yes. I'm really captivated with this.

Dude, I’ve read webcomics where they have uploaded multiple pages at once, and it’s just better to just upload one page at a time, even if there almost nothing that happens on a page, and it’s the firsts new upload in MONTHS

Y.... Si todo fue un sueño de Teo desde el comienzo?

If it's not a illusion, Helena is not dead...then she had better explanation.

No one is going to talk about that he now had killed several people in a brutal way for nothing? XD

If this turns out to be true, I really want to see the look on his face when he realizes this.

This keep getting more interesting!!!

https://www.furaffinity.net/view/38599433/ - Next Chapter

That's a big suprise even for me.

ah caray! O___O no me esperaba eso