-) Oooh, I like the plucked synth and bass. I might advise choosing a better kick, one that hits you a little more, the one you choose was good but I think FL can offer better.

-) Opening Vox was nice, and helped to set the mood. Where is it from?

Thanks, I'm glad you liked the synth! It took me a bit to get it timed and tuned right, but it came out exactly how I wanted :D The voice came with FL, but it sounded like an 18 year old was talking, so I lowered the pitch and slowed the tempo a bit. If you want it, I could export the stock file for you As for the kick, I had the same thoughts, but I was unsure. I'll probably switch to a clap which I had originally. It had allot more force. Thanks a ton for the help man!

-) Try a snare, it will add a much harsher emotion than the clap. As for the voice, wicked, I was thinking of using a vox sometime or another, but I can never really think of one I like. And as for you, go check out my latest submission

This is the first time you make something like thiiiis?~ =O I'm impressed, and I really like it ^-^

Ya, its my first time. Your impressed, seriously? Wow, thanks!

Very seriously! :3 and you are welcome! ^^

*dances in circles*

*Giggles while watching him* Cute :3