It has now been 7 years since I first uploaded that vore story to my DeviantArt account. And while that account may be dead, and site just worse-ish, I still live on. That story has hit nearly 1600 views on FA, and over 3k views on dA. That story, as short and bad as it is, has been my most popular upload somehow. So I decided to revisit the story and improve upon it as a way of seeing how far I have come when writing stories. I kinda put it off, despite having this planned since the end of September. Its kinda short, but its definitely better than the original. 7 years of RPing has really allowed me to add extra details to my works, even though I do not write that often.

This redux stands for all that has changed since my original upload. My sona is now a Mew. I have a dragon pet and an Electrike pup. A LOT has changed in the last 7 years. I apologize that it isn't that much longer, but I put it off too long, and plus, there isn't much I can do with the original. Still, I hope you enjoy this. if you wanna read the original story to see the improvement (though it isn't that much), click here.

I am looking for tips and criticism. But please be gentle if you can.