Getting back on the road
Drawing motorcycles is so hard... I'm sure there are parts you can see where I just got lazy with it and wanted to be done (especially with shit like the wheels on the cart.) I think Riley's face on the middle right panel looks kinda awkward/not cute, also accidentally gave them a super long neck. Also god the goggles.. I never feel like I get the right size or spacing on them ever. Also ALSO that fucking key panel... Shows up way too many times. When I started this comic I was a lil too autistic about lil details of continuity of like well they gotta START the motorcycle they can't just get on it and go when I've already shown before that they start the engine. I mean part of it was also panel filler but jeez do I hate that panel by the end of the comic, it shows up like at least 5 times?? or something like that. Too much.
Drawing motorcycles is so hard... I'm sure there are parts you can see where I just got lazy with it and wanted to be done (especially with shit like the wheels on the cart.) I think Riley's face on the middle right panel looks kinda awkward/not cute, also accidentally gave them a super long neck. Also god the goggles.. I never feel like I get the right size or spacing on them ever. Also ALSO that fucking key panel... Shows up way too many times. When I started this comic I was a lil too autistic about lil details of continuity of like well they gotta START the motorcycle they can't just get on it and go when I've already shown before that they start the engine. I mean part of it was also panel filler but jeez do I hate that panel by the end of the comic, it shows up like at least 5 times?? or something like that. Too much.
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Baby fur
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 915 x 1280px
File Size 280 kB
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Riley's face in the middle panel is adorable. They look refreshed after having completed their first delivery of the day and look ready to tackle whatever comes next. The wheels on the cart do look at bit off, but honestly I wouldn't have noticed unless you mentioned it. I love how Riley had a cute, submissive energy when dealing with Shane, but when they're riding their bike, they look so badass! I love contrasts like that existing within the same character, so Riley is really growing on me!
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