I like the poor ghost. Poor ghost, poor puppet-bird, poor everyone, even Tabrix. You did really good with the emotion and narrative in this piece, and I really like how it fills in so much about Tabrix, especially when you read a little between the lines. And I love the way they talk to each other, and the way Savbit explains things to Amice, and how Amice... is. She's very relatable. I understand her terribly well.
It's good and right to be sad sometimes.

everyone always wants to be the protagonist in a harem fanfiction

no one ever considers how it feels for the harem when the protag is away

this was a powerful exchange, loved some of the writing elements here.

i feel so bad for tabrix's harem and yet i would give up this piddly life to live it instantly also

"the Tabrix statue"

So you admit it, then

VORE

Oh that's *adorable!*

I love this. This is such a neat little side-story oh my god wow