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Fureasha is my next major piece after Tropical, but it's in it's very early stages. This is the first draft of the very short prologue (will be worked on more later), the first chapter and like a sentence of the second chapter (because I was too lazy to take it out for this post).
After reading a couple random stories on FA, I was inspired to add more background to my stories; instead of just saying "they walked to the keep, and the fox waited in the courtyard." With the added in background context, hopefully you'll find it more interesting to read. I also hope that this will lengthen my chapters to up to about 20 pages per chapter. And that my story will eventually be well over 100 pages when finished.
I did draw a map for this story so when locations are mentioned, they're not random. Maybe if an artists would like to draw it for me then I'd scan it and give them my sketch. ;)
Let me know what you think! Thanks for reading!
P.S. Thumbnail is not related unless someone is willing to offer to draw me a thumbnail (contact me for details if interested). And there will be few to no more postings about this story until the full first or second draft is finished.
After reading a couple random stories on FA, I was inspired to add more background to my stories; instead of just saying "they walked to the keep, and the fox waited in the courtyard." With the added in background context, hopefully you'll find it more interesting to read. I also hope that this will lengthen my chapters to up to about 20 pages per chapter. And that my story will eventually be well over 100 pages when finished.
I did draw a map for this story so when locations are mentioned, they're not random. Maybe if an artists would like to draw it for me then I'd scan it and give them my sketch. ;)
Let me know what you think! Thanks for reading!
P.S. Thumbnail is not related unless someone is willing to offer to draw me a thumbnail (contact me for details if interested). And there will be few to no more postings about this story until the full first or second draft is finished.
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Otter
Size 120 x 90px
File Size 77.5 kB
^_^ Not a bad piece, though I can say that I was slightly surprised by the name taken by your fox. I also have a fox character named sage that I use in fantasy settings, however they have their own immense differences it was just surprising. Though the general direction of the plot at this point isn't very concealed I can see a lot of potential twists depending on the stances taken by society in Fureasha 's a nice little piece.
Keep it up!
Triss
Keep it up!
Triss
Odd coincidence about the same name. I don't believe I've seen your fantasy story yet. I'd be delighted to read it sometime though ;)
There are a few instances where I'm foreshadowing in these first few pages, but I did intend that the plot not be known. And hopefully the twists that I do have planned will be to your enjoyment. And hopefully I can come up with a real title.
Thank you once again for reading my submissions. It is an honor to have another talented writer read, and offer feedback, on all my submissions.
There are a few instances where I'm foreshadowing in these first few pages, but I did intend that the plot not be known. And hopefully the twists that I do have planned will be to your enjoyment. And hopefully I can come up with a real title.
Thank you once again for reading my submissions. It is an honor to have another talented writer read, and offer feedback, on all my submissions.
-blushes- it might be a stretch to call me a talented writer just yet and it seems you've attracted a lot more attention so far than I have as well. XP
My Sage was created for an 'epic poem' My soft copies have long since vanished I believe, but I still have a hard copy. Might retype it at some point.
Triss
My Sage was created for an 'epic poem' My soft copies have long since vanished I believe, but I still have a hard copy. Might retype it at some point.
Triss
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