I've been wanting to try two journal entries in a chapter, and since I needed more to flesh out this chapter, I decided this would be as good a place as ever to try it out. I think it came out well, but it isn't really my opinion that counts here n.n;; So, to my readers, if you like it or not, give me an opinion, please!
As always: Constructive criticism is encouraged, praise is welcome, and if you feel like complaining or trolling without doing anything useful then here's an early "Fuck you" for you so I don't have to say it later~
As always: Constructive criticism is encouraged, praise is welcome, and if you feel like complaining or trolling without doing anything useful then here's an early "Fuck you" for you so I don't have to say it later~
Category Story / All
Species Vulpine (Other)
Size 120 x 112px
File Size 9.9 kB
Aside from some VERY minor spelling and grammatical changes I might make, the story was touching. Seriously touching. I could actually feel the sudden pain of Rose, and the sudden realization that he was dead completely caught me off guard; I was very shocked, to say the least. I'm 100% interested now...I want to know more. OH PLEASE write more!
FA+


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