I really enjoy the dynamics of the reaction formation with Kenzie. How he sees Max as a gluttonous, loud, prey hungry badger, but he can be great help. And another reason why Max can't eat Kenzie is that he believes that he can be a good person by helping Kenzie . Despite Kenzie giving the cold shoulder of getting live prey.


And Kenzie has good points to letting him be with Max for rent, college, and a good subject for his test, yet maybe he has a hint of romance ? Sure in the story there is nothing hinting of that ideal according to Kenzie, yet since he is enjoying the body of Max and loving that sweet gut can lead to ideas about it.


Over all I love how you did with Kenzie's point of view and Im curious of what will happen next.


Will Kenzie someday sees what it's like to be a big pred him self like max ?

There was a point that was highlighted in yellow for some reason, I think you may want to fix that. LOL

Anyway, in terms of the story, it was just as awesome to see Kenzie's point of view as Max's. He's such an easily distracted guy, though he doesn't want to admit it.

Also, Max is quickly becoming one of my favorite OC preds ever. Just sayin'.

Sincerely,
The Cheshire Cat's Master

Great story! Especially liked the teasing and belly worship ^^