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Hiya folks! Things have been rather quiet since I've been busy with school and whatnot, but here's a small story here, a sampler so-to-speak. If it's any consolation, it's up to you whether it can continue or go onto another. Feedback is appreciated!
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Don't break your chapters into small parts, do chapters in whole parts. Good description out. A lot better action flow description and story work. Continue to work on your anthropomorphic description beyond just feline. Think of the individuals and their anthropomorphic traits.
Its up to you not an audience to continue a work or not.
Its up to you not an audience to continue a work or not.
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