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OH MY GOD, IT'S ALMOST DONE! x_X
Actually, its done except for the music and a few minor changes, but since i can't get that in till at least next week, we'll call this done for the moment.
Comments, critiques, opinions, all are welcome ^^
Actually, its done except for the music and a few minor changes, but since i can't get that in till at least next week, we'll call this done for the moment.
Comments, critiques, opinions, all are welcome ^^
Category Flash / Fantasy
Species Gryphon
Size 720 x 480px
File Size 401.9 kB
The way the bird flaps its wings it will fly backwards. When the bird flies, vertical speed shouldn't be ideally equal; when the bird flips wings down, it gets a little higher; when up, a little lower. You should also watch videos of birds taking off, because currently it's not realistic.
You should avoid ideal linear movements, because it's not the way alive creatures move in reality. When the gryphon moves head towards the nest, there should be secondary movements like slight rotation or up/down; like your head moves when you walk, maybe exaggerated for the purposes of animation.
I like the concept. :)
You should avoid ideal linear movements, because it's not the way alive creatures move in reality. When the gryphon moves head towards the nest, there should be secondary movements like slight rotation or up/down; like your head moves when you walk, maybe exaggerated for the purposes of animation.
I like the concept. :)
Wow...That is a fantastic critique, thank you very much!
For deadline purposes, I had to clip a few parts out of this (which is why it ends on a still) but I was hoping to extend and edit it soon. I will certainly look into fixing these parts when I do. Thank you very much, this is a great help ^^
For deadline purposes, I had to clip a few parts out of this (which is why it ends on a still) but I was hoping to extend and edit it soon. I will certainly look into fixing these parts when I do. Thank you very much, this is a great help ^^
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