bout time ya posted this ya slowpoke :P

hmph!...hehehe...i'm just glad to finally have written something on here again. :)

its a great read i thoroughly enjoyed it

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it! :)

no thank you for the great read X3

Such a touching ending, well done master!

A very exciting story. I love the emphasis you put on the slimes and muscous, as well as the smell - these are the best parts of vore's sensual nature. Also, you capture the desire of being inside something bigger, greater, and while the prey doesn't fully understand what he feels, you as the author make it clear. One or two small typos here and there, but other than that one of the better stories I have read recently. I would love to have a chat sometime - see my page for my MSN details

for me one of the best parts of vore is the physical feel, the sheer domination and slickness of being inside another. and glad i was able to capture that some for others as well. as for MSN, sure, i'm on YIM, i'll add ya and make sure to let you know it's me. Wouldn't mind a chat myself. :)