<3 i think ist good.

Wow, you read FAST... That should've been nearly 10 pages of single spaced writing to sort through. ^>^

But, thanks ^>^ I'm glad you liked it... any suggestions on it?

Very nice the time changes were an interesting effect. so one question though, who was Fahla? overall very nice. poor dragon but awesome the way she acted.

would have been here sooner but the power was out for 2 hours.

well, as i mentioned, this was horribly rushed. I was originally going to put it to where Fahla was a higher ranking Sylvii and Draci's sorta-girlfriend... though she was critical of him, as shown throughout.

The time changes were a necessity... at least I thought so. It took away from the sense of reality and sorta blurred what was "real" and what was a romanticized memory. The dragon was supposed to be a voice of reason, to point out the fallicies of the thought processes of society, but I don't think I pulled that off quite right.

Though, at the end, she was the one in the right, being embraced by the river [and the earth too] where as dracil, the true monster, was rejected by everything. Hehe.

Well, I'm glad you liked it ^.^

wow now that i really understand it it made it ever better such depth - so di du pass your english? i wish i could write things like this for english

I don't know. I have to go tomorrow to find out if he actually read it and gave me a grade. XDright now I have an 85 in the class, but that's NOOOOT good... It's horrid if I get anything lower than a 93%

doing summer classes, mine where canceled gl

oooh, well, for AP english Lit and Comp, I have summer homework too.. so yeah, that really sucks on my part.. but, fortunately there's no real writing. xD