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KenGreninja
Zootopia & all characters © The Walt Disney Company
Plain Text on DeviantArt
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KenGreninjaZootopia & all characters © The Walt Disney Company
Plain Text on DeviantArt
PDF on Weasyl
Category Story / Fat Furs
Species Gazelle
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 85.9 kB
Hot damn, Musty! Another story that’s quite long! For one, I adored the word choices for describing Gazelle. I also loved the usage of action-style scenes. Usually, in a lot of fetishy stories, it’s just the fetish material. You, however, include actual story. Which is a breath of fresh air.
You never fail to disappoint. I can’t wait until the next story
You never fail to disappoint. I can’t wait until the next story
Thank you so much, Fitz! I put a lot of care into word choice, so I'm glad it stood out.
I'm also pleased that you appreciated the action scenes. Kink material is almost always my first priority, but plot and character are close seconds. The more believable a story is, the easier it is for the reader to suspend their disbelief and immerse themselves. Which makes it easier for them to enjoy the kink material.
Thanks again for the kind words! I always appreciate your feedback.
I'm also pleased that you appreciated the action scenes. Kink material is almost always my first priority, but plot and character are close seconds. The more believable a story is, the easier it is for the reader to suspend their disbelief and immerse themselves. Which makes it easier for them to enjoy the kink material.
Thanks again for the kind words! I always appreciate your feedback.
I no longer felt comfortable having a story in my gallery with extreme slob material. I was concerned that the story would turn away people who dislike it. Or make people who like it ask for it in commissions, and then get disappointed or frustrated when I tell them I don't do it anymore.
I don't mean to kink-shame -- if someone likes it, that's perfectly okay. It's just not for me, and it's not for my gallery anymore.
I don't mean to kink-shame -- if someone likes it, that's perfectly okay. It's just not for me, and it's not for my gallery anymore.
Haha, glad you enjoyed it and are getting into enormous weight gain! One of us, one of us~ ;D
And yes, great catch! I wanted Gazelle to eat an elephant next, and it had to be one who was thought to be insane, so that they'd be in a padded cell right next to hers. So I thought of Horton -- which worked out well, since his story also involves dramatic size contrast~!
And yes, great catch! I wanted Gazelle to eat an elephant next, and it had to be one who was thought to be insane, so that they'd be in a padded cell right next to hers. So I thought of Horton -- which worked out well, since his story also involves dramatic size contrast~!
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