ok have not gotten any better in submisstions, and i hope you enjoy what i have put up if you finish
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 90px
File Size 68.7 kB
The characters emotions are very strong. However for transition states let things move naturally through action by showing not telling. Mainly in the introduction and through small events. This will allow more exploration and establish better detail for the audience allowing scenes to come to life.
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