These are concept sketches of Chapter titles for each well...story or whatever. Please i really need to be critiqued on these concepts. No anatomy or those kind of critiques, i'm looking for of more of a composition wise, atmosphere, etc sort. Please and thank you! ^^

NOTE: Please look at my own notes i've taken if that should help at all.
NOTE 2: Tomorrow night will be the "Thumbnail sketches" of my comic series. This is a prelude \^-^/ (HUZZAH!)