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In 2003, I fell off the horse and went back to having an online "girlfriend". I say "girlfriend" in quotes because she turned out to be a guy, and not even a transgendered guy. We drifted apart and I can't even remember her name at this point. I wrote this for 'her'.
That said, in re-reading it, I thought it was a pretty darn good sonnet, and aside from the mention of the 'otter', could be used in a far more general sense than the one I wrote it under. I don't know, what do you guys think?
That said, in re-reading it, I thought it was a pretty darn good sonnet, and aside from the mention of the 'otter', could be used in a far more general sense than the one I wrote it under. I don't know, what do you guys think?
Category Poetry / General Furry Art
Species Otter
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 626 B
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That's happened to you? Sorry to hear that...aside from once being mistaken for a girl by a drunk and horny lesbian, I've never fooled anyone into believing I was anything other than my assigned gender. :>
But the poem is great, especially the "unfinished ending". If you hadn't put it up in a public place, I'd say you should re-use it on some other deserving furry femme--but if she found out it was second hand, I'd be prepared for quite a bit of fallout. :D
But the poem is great, especially the "unfinished ending". If you hadn't put it up in a public place, I'd say you should re-use it on some other deserving furry femme--but if she found out it was second hand, I'd be prepared for quite a bit of fallout. :D
I think it's pretty dang good. If poetry doesn't keep me in the first two or three lines, I'm usually gone. :)
The 'otter' could easily be changed out like you said, and I agree with both Hauke and PepperCoyote on the ending and that one particular line. Those parts stood out for me.
The 'otter' could easily be changed out like you said, and I agree with both Hauke and PepperCoyote on the ending and that one particular line. Those parts stood out for me.
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