Winter werewolf time
Blood & snow
Category All / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1450 x 787px
File Size 1.47 MB
Hunger is the God of the tundra, and flesh must be hunted. So beware you soft humans.
https://youtu.be/J43AadqQkOg
https://youtu.be/J43AadqQkOg
It's a pretty good piece, unfocused background really gives the figure prominence, the eyes are a good focal point, the scars are a nice touch.
However I believe that the piece could be more dynamic, so far my eyes focus on the focal point but doesn't travel to any other part of the piece, I would think maybe in one of her paws that she holds a heart or something that would help traverse this visceral piece, I think it would've been better also if the scars we're pink for more naturalism and to maybe help look around and break away from the similar colors on her body. Even though everyone's interpretation of werewolves is different I always felt best to show athletic physique unless you meant to make it shaggy because it's in the winter after all. She should have well nipples haha I always feels weird when a character or creature is naked but is 'neutered' unless it's suppose to be for children. Finally I think the piece could be more impactful if there was a 'tunnel vision' so that the viewer would feel as if he/she was the one being attacked/dying to give it a more horror feel.
Anyways it's a great piece of werewolf attacking someone and thanks for sharing. :3
However I believe that the piece could be more dynamic, so far my eyes focus on the focal point but doesn't travel to any other part of the piece, I would think maybe in one of her paws that she holds a heart or something that would help traverse this visceral piece, I think it would've been better also if the scars we're pink for more naturalism and to maybe help look around and break away from the similar colors on her body. Even though everyone's interpretation of werewolves is different I always felt best to show athletic physique unless you meant to make it shaggy because it's in the winter after all. She should have well nipples haha I always feels weird when a character or creature is naked but is 'neutered' unless it's suppose to be for children. Finally I think the piece could be more impactful if there was a 'tunnel vision' so that the viewer would feel as if he/she was the one being attacked/dying to give it a more horror feel.
Anyways it's a great piece of werewolf attacking someone and thanks for sharing. :3
I know you did and I was just merely giving a constructive criticism and shouldn't feel offended for someone who would take the time to give different examples on achieving the same effect and at least I actually put some thought into it. I do draw my own art even though I'm a novice and I solely do this to better myself creatively. Now I won't give comments anymore since that's what you wish but no need to be rude.
Please don't put me in the position that I'm not grateful for some random advice that I've never even asked for :) I'm not gonna "fix" anything on the already finished work because someone I don't even know wants me to. You're a guest on my page you're welcomed here - just don't break my borders by thinking that you can write weird things and then trying to put the blame on me for not accepting them. This is what is rude here.
Criticism is a tricky subject, but there are certain rules in the art world that make it relevant:
1. First and the most important thing - it was requested by artist.
2. You are my teacher and I'm learning from you.
3. You are my commissioner and you're paying for the work to be done the way you want it.
The rest is totally your impulses and strangers aren't obliged to follow them. Be well now and have a good day!
Criticism is a tricky subject, but there are certain rules in the art world that make it relevant:
1. First and the most important thing - it was requested by artist.
2. You are my teacher and I'm learning from you.
3. You are my commissioner and you're paying for the work to be done the way you want it.
The rest is totally your impulses and strangers aren't obliged to follow them. Be well now and have a good day!
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