Maybe works better as a song than a poem, try to come up a catchy chorusline or two :D

And maybe if you could replace the world love with someting less used and more cunning way to put it. Go Shakespeare on me!

Other than that I got no problems with it :3 Good work.

For you, anything.....

Well I was just trying to say something, to let you see I cared enough to think on it.

But I'm no editor.

I was not being a jerk.....

I was being honest.....for you, anything.....

I thank you for the comment...I am bad at these things.....I agreed with you and fixed it somewhat......

The morning after
I will kiss your ghost
and let go

I see, Well, I am glad that I didn't offend you then. :)

And yes, now I like the flow of this poem more. Significant difference in my eyes.

I am one to be rarely offended, my friend.....

Thank you for your wonderful help.......I am glad you like your version....without you it would not be.....

I've been collecting stones that I think I'll throw at you
I can't forget your face
I'm sorry dear but that's my cue
I'll be the first to leave
And return with a ring
Just keep your ears open and one day you might hear me sing

And I did not state theis before.....

Please, forgive me......

I felt safe
and she's been singing out of tune
just then I'm flying to the moon

You've certainly got the nack for poetry, haven't you? :3

My flesh and my heart fail......