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It's the companion cupcake! It's your only friend! Don't eat it or i can't invite it to the party for you! *tapes pictures of the cupcake over faces of people in photoes* If it talks don't follow it's advice it's your friend but you shouldn't hurt it! companion cupcake .... companion cupcake .... COMPANION CUPCAKE! *gets locked up in an insane asylum.*
I just started reading your comic for the first time today! I'm so in love with it so far!
The pick-up line pages were my most favorite. I laughed and laughed and laughed until it hurt!
I can't wait to see what happens next! ...I should probably watch you so I can keep up with it ^^
The pick-up line pages were my most favorite. I laughed and laughed and laughed until it hurt!
I can't wait to see what happens next! ...I should probably watch you so I can keep up with it ^^
your comic is telling a wonderful story so far Xizana and I like it. Funny thing is I got done watching the new alice in wonderland a few days ago and this is making me thinking of it. I like your spin on it a lot more. if by change you ever put out a hard book copy of your comic I'd like to eb able to buy a signed copy from you! teehee! And nice panty shots by the way....
loving it so far chica. ^^ you are getting better and better with different things as each page comes out ^^
I have one little crit though. the last panel, when she turns to look at the cupcake (which looks yummy btw XD) her left ear that's farthest from the "audience" or cupcake (you get it, lol) is a little too long in comparison to her other ear judging by the angle you have it at. you'd probably need to bring it up a little above the length of the other ear since it would be pointing slightly away from xizzy's head and on a 2D view would appear shorter than the other ear, but judging it in a realistic viewpoint it would be correctly lengthened... bleh *wheezes from paragraph* lol
that's all though, everything looks great and i can't wait to read more ^^
I have one little crit though. the last panel, when she turns to look at the cupcake (which looks yummy btw XD) her left ear that's farthest from the "audience" or cupcake (you get it, lol) is a little too long in comparison to her other ear judging by the angle you have it at. you'd probably need to bring it up a little above the length of the other ear since it would be pointing slightly away from xizzy's head and on a 2D view would appear shorter than the other ear, but judging it in a realistic viewpoint it would be correctly lengthened... bleh *wheezes from paragraph* lol
that's all though, everything looks great and i can't wait to read more ^^
it's definitely a challenge i have issues with myself. i normally have to do the picture a bajillion times over sit back look an i'm still not happy with it. lol.
still this is looking very good so just take it as a learning experience, it doesn't mean it's wrong just because of my crit, i was just notin if you wanted any crit is all ^^ lubs joo chica, keep it going, your art is very refreshing ^^
still this is looking very good so just take it as a learning experience, it doesn't mean it's wrong just because of my crit, i was just notin if you wanted any crit is all ^^ lubs joo chica, keep it going, your art is very refreshing ^^
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