I'm 12 years old. I have a good life. I got a loving family with two great brothers. Sure, I don't have as many friends at school, but the few I do have are awesome. Sarah is one of these awesome friends. She was the first one to get over the fact I have you, Ahya. She saw past the scariness and saw me for me. She liked you too, of course. She was the best friend I could have ever asked for. She got me through so many years of school and ridicule when all I wanted to do was cry, run home and give up. She was my rock when I was studying in class. We made promises to grow old together and be cranky and yell at kids as they tromped on our lawns.
So why did you have to go and eat Sarah, Ahya? Why?! What did she ever do to you? Why won't you answer? Why won't you look at me? Look at me!! Why did you do this? Why are you like this? Give her back!! Give Sarah back... I've got to make this right and apologize to her for what you did. Except, I don't think I can anymore. I feel her now in my belly. She's gone now. All gone. I feel the sickness in my stomach knowing she's gone. Can't you bring her back, Ahya? Please, let her go. Ahya, please...just let Sarah go... Mommy... I'm so sorry. It's all my fault.
Art Done by: Flabby Otter - FurAffinity Account: https://www.furaffinity.net/user/flabbyotter/
So why did you have to go and eat Sarah, Ahya? Why?! What did she ever do to you? Why won't you answer? Why won't you look at me? Look at me!! Why did you do this? Why are you like this? Give her back!! Give Sarah back... I've got to make this right and apologize to her for what you did. Except, I don't think I can anymore. I feel her now in my belly. She's gone now. All gone. I feel the sickness in my stomach knowing she's gone. Can't you bring her back, Ahya? Please, let her go. Ahya, please...just let Sarah go... Mommy... I'm so sorry. It's all my fault.
Art Done by: Flabby Otter - FurAffinity Account: https://www.furaffinity.net/user/flabbyotter/
Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Wolf
Size 930 x 670px
File Size 3.74 MB
Look. As I know about writing. You weren't suppose to joke. People who reads the story have to sympathize with the characters. I know that it was suppose to be funny, but you cannot make jokes about things like that. Author just wants you to feel sympathy for the character of the story. Like in Persona series. Some characters die and feel sad that they're character died being very attatched to the character. The loss of a best friend forever is very sad and very heartbroken experience that everyone could relate to. If you did had lost a best friend that you would like to spend more time with wouldn't you feel sad like anyone else?
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_D....._of_the_Author
Death of the Author, there's no right or wrong way to interpret art.
Death of the Author, there's no right or wrong way to interpret art.
This is all backstory too. We start off with Taylor in book 1 when she’s 19, not 12 here. So lots have happened since then. Her story fills in as we go through her books and ultimately how she learns to move forward and adapt. But you need a crisis to start a character arc, this moment would be it.
As someone who loves writing and does little writings to themsselves, I commend the emotion here. I saw it this morning and it still hits me!. As someone who enjoys vore as a whole and has been around this situations before ( unintentional vore). This made me go "Oh shit... How awful!" The visualizations of what could've happened during that scene flood my mind, the panic and emotion of her trying to prevent it but to no avail to eventually lead up to this scene here. I have never seen your art ( which I am learning is all connected to the story) or your story until today but it makes me greatly interested to see what it's been like for her to live with this and what happened after ( I had read snippets from other pictures ) family leading up and after this moment. Awesome job! (I'll get over the emotions eventually X3)
FA+

Comments