Part of this one appears to have been cut off.

Yeah it was definitely too long to fit posted in description. To read to the end you need to download it and save or view the file.

I think this has been a problem for all the chapters I posted. So I’m not sure what people do to make longer things more easily readable.

If you load them as a TXT document when submitting, then it appears posted, without having to be downloaded or put in the description.

Thank you 😊 so that’s the answer.

In the morning I will re upload things.

Yay! Hugs

Ok we got there I think. Hopefully someone will comment about the end lol and I will know it worked. . .

Alright, it's all there!

So there things; first off, I love that Jane named the robot plush Tom after the longtime host of everyone's favorite Anime/action cartoon programming block Toonami! Secondly, I have a feeling that if you choose to have Maria regress to Jane's new age, she'll have to go through the wringer with her biological deadbeat mom and dad, like getting totally blamed for everything wrong with their messed up married, or walking in on one of them attempting suicide, something on that level of bad. But at the same time, I've been reading this whole thing and you have a fantastic understanding of how to write satisfying emotional moments and the drama that comes with coming from a rough household, so I know it wouldn't seem like your just writing drama for dramas sake. You are a fantastic writer and I know you could easily pull off a scene that rips our hearts apart easily and still have us love you for it. And finally thirdly, I really like the detail of having Jane move a lot in his sleep as my family practically partially raised my baby cousin whose household was really unstable with his mom and dad constantly on the verge of a painful seperation/divorce and his mom succumbing to every available vice around from chain smoking to alcohol, to expired prescription medication, and because of all this he always tossed and turned in his sleep and even fell our of bed a few times just like he was Little Nemo in Slumberland. You clearly care a lot about the welfare of children in troubled homes and having to partially care for a relative from such a home myself, that means a lot to me. So I guess I just want to say, thank you so very much for not shying away from the tough realities of Jane's previous home situations! I know some people will try to argue that a site like Furaffinity is not the place for such a frank and serious look at this topic, but I love and appreciate what you are doing with this story, and if no one else brings it up I wanted to personally state how glad I am you are writing this story this way.