Hm, I'm thinkin' we missed a chapter or somethin', here! Or is the time gap between parts 7 and 8 intentional?

...OY!! You are quite right... For some reason, the consistency between the parts of the story on FA and the parts of the story on here are inconsistent >.> This is part 8 on FA, but only Part 7 in my word document. Ah well. Fixed now!

So I caught a glimpse of Chapter 9, eh? Nice! No spoilers from me, though!

Well, I daresay you caught more than a glimpse of Chapter 9. I'm sure the other readers are pleased by your lack of spoilers though :)

CAUGHT!!! *hisses* Ouch... well hopefully things go alright for the wolfy and kitty. They seem like a perfect pair. <3 Especially the kitty. *murrs*

Mmm yes I'd love to snuggle up to Ben xD And I don't know about perfect, but so far they've got along splendidly I'd agree :)

Now as for going alright... Well I hate stories with not-happy endings. >:(

interesting twist, cute couple but sad face the mom is so backwards in thinking

Yeah, poor guy. Well, guys. It's not Ben's parents, but still.

Looks like Colin's suspicions were right, poor guy. Both of them. I hope his father is more accepting. Or, if not, there's alternative for the pair of them.

And It hink just about everyone would want to snuggle up to Ben, heheh.

Sometimes it sucks to be right.

And yes, I daresay the majority of my followers would like that very much xD

It does. Once again, hopefully his hopes about his father are right.

And you can't exactly blame them, can you? xD

Of course not xD How could I blame anyone for wanting to run their hands over a nice big soft tiger belly? x3

I realize that you try to break loose the traditional confines of the erotic furry genre, but you do mix in some odd elements with your pr0nz, you know.

xD I'm sure I do.
I was just talking to WillSpark about this, and basically admitted that I tend to write the story as it comes to me and don't look back.

Cool dads are awesome!

The way you described Ben in this makes me wanna be Colin. :) Without the Mom thing of course. I want Ben!!! DX

D'awww x3 I think the general consensus is we ALL want Ben xD

Yes we all do, I shall clone him!!! *laughs like a mad scientist*

Wow. That makes you a pretty unique fur, then x3 And I'm glad we can respectfully disagree? While not a Theology student, I'm a pastor's kid and have grown up with Christianity a constant in my life.

Fortunately my coming out did not go nearly as rough. My parents are basically of the same view that you are, that while there is nothing they condone about my homosexuality, due to they think it's sin, they still love me. And I guess I can't ask for much else from them, really.

It's okay. They are working in my ~*imagination*~

?Yay! Good to see more from you = 3

Yeah I read chapter 9 too x3 But no spoilers from me either~ I hate spoilers.

But yesh! Awesome story thus far~! Personally I prefer stories with longer chapters tbh but still love it <3 I write most of my stories as I go too x3 Like Chief said, it seems to take out a bit of the excitement but still some great stories out there!

And yesh, I wouldn't mind being Ben ;)

Sry, long comment that's all over the place, I know x3

Longing for chapter 9, hope it comes soon...

Very nice story, and I like how you´re splitting it up in more manageable parts and adding some depth to the characters. I really like your descriptions of Colin and all his friends.

I love weight gain stories.But can't read yours for some reason.Could you post your stories at so furry to plz?

Wow, really loving this! The progression is nice and made me go back and take a look at your other stories, like the one about Blake. Looking forward to the next installment and more Ben!

Looks like you have the same thing I do. Stopping on something and moving on to something new.

I hope we get chapter 9 soon

Well...that's one way to come out of the closet. Certainly not the best or preferable way, but it's a way nonetheless.

Hope to see a new chapter soon!

Really good read if only you had continue it and made Ben have another vitamin booster... I know a new one is never coming but you can always hope. This was one of the better reads I had and if you had continue it you would have had a lot of watchers and probably have commissions these 8 chapters were very well done you had some real good talent I hope you break through what ever this is man.

I get the impression that you'll never read this, but this story is fantastic. All of the characters are so lovable and fun and surprisingly real, and the relationship between Ben and Colin is so so cute and intimate. Your dialogue is energetic and thoughtfully tailored to each character--I know who all of these people are and how they speak even without the story in front of me. I didn't expect it to develop into furry X-men but the concept is so fun and silly and I fell in love with it.

Really great stuff. I do hope you continue uploading your writing. Regardless, I hope you're proud to have created something of value that's clearly resonated with a handful of people.