I think it's safe to say Adam found his inner squirrel, and he has a battle-scar to prove it. I'm pretty happy with most of this. Only thing I don't like on the last panel is that Chucky and Adam are a little difficult to see with the background. But then, the mountains and the depth came out better than I thought they would.
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Man, I haven't climbed a tree in years...
When I was a kid I'd often climb a large pine we had in the backyard. When I visit my parents the yard now looks bare without it... it succumbed to some kind of beetle.
Now, to climb a tree like the one Chucky and Adam are in? I'd definitely need to use gaffs, and I've only gotten to play with those once so I'd still be a little nervous about it.
Definitely dig the backgrounds in this, especially the final panel.
When I was a kid I'd often climb a large pine we had in the backyard. When I visit my parents the yard now looks bare without it... it succumbed to some kind of beetle.
Now, to climb a tree like the one Chucky and Adam are in? I'd definitely need to use gaffs, and I've only gotten to play with those once so I'd still be a little nervous about it.
Definitely dig the backgrounds in this, especially the final panel.
Hey, if you want some advice, I've got a tip that would help with shots like the final panel, there! If you make the things in the background sort of faded and a bit cooler in color, it would both look further away, to really show the depth, and help keep the characters from getting lost in the image.
Thanks for the tip dude. I was a little bummed with how much the characters got lost. In hindsight I probably shouldn't have used one of Photoshop's patterns for the mountains. I actually did blur them, but even then it probably still wasn't enough. Tips are always appreciated, thanks.
I like that Chucky's hair merges with the word bubble in the third panel. Very clever.
Once again, fantastic work on the backgrounds, especially in the last panel.
Something that might help emphasize the characters - you could try giving them heavy shadows and/or highlights to outline them a bit. May or may not work for your style, but it's an idea.
Once again, fantastic work on the backgrounds, especially in the last panel.
Something that might help emphasize the characters - you could try giving them heavy shadows and/or highlights to outline them a bit. May or may not work for your style, but it's an idea.
I think you got it just right in the last panel, the two characters are intrinsic to the scenery, but not as important. Space is the key to this kind of picture. Here in the west we put quite a lot of emphasis on the figure as something that competes with the background, where conversely, in the east... you might have seen those quaint scroll paintings of the mountain or something and off in a corner is a tiny figure, almost indistinguishable. You might at first think that the title of the piece is related to the scenery, but it's not, usually in this case the title is something like: A warm cup of tea. Only a westerner would then try to get up close and squint to try and make out the details of the tiny figure and ignore the mountain.
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