Kayche looks so yummy, I just wanna pounce him when he's all shaking from the cold rain like that.
But yes, um, I'm glad you like it. *looks around nervously* Goodness...*sips tea*

Damn right he is. < v<)/ *yanks Kayche closer on his leash* >v >);; (double sweatbead)

Love it! The old style paper effect really works.

Thanks so much! I like going for the vintage look. It seems to be my nich lately.

Not enough people go outside the plain black lines and white paper for comics. Changing just a few things can lead to a completely different mood. I mean, look at the layout here: http://pd.milkinthepantry.com/comics/080716.jpg

You know how to work the medium.

Myuuuuuuu( /w\)

I love how this looks, and the story seems uber cute so far. I like this alot. Please continue!! >u< I want to do my own little comic, but I feel I'd fail horribly. I suck at panels! Wonderful job, dear. -sips some tea with you and pets your head- ^^

Kayche will need victims. I noticed your gore art lately.
*looks side to side* Hey. Hey buddy. You wanna be famous?
You wanna be in a comic? *shifty eyes again* >_>) (<_<)

oAo -points to self- M-me? lol
Can I create a character for this, or would you like it to be my sona? Either way is cool. ouo Let me get on MSN real quick so we can talk more in-depth. ^^

Yeah I know lol. I was just wondering if she would like to just use my sona or an alternate character. XD Either way, Kayche is going to fuck someone up. X3

*drools over him* HE IS HOT! Lovely job on the comic! I love it! I'm going to have to learn from you ^.^

D'awww, you honor me hehe. But I'm glad you like it so much.
And INORITE? ZOMFG!!! He's such a beefcake! <3<3 GAHH! *girl squeals*
*instantly switches back to proper british hen* Quite. *sips tea*

*looks at you and takes one of your biscuits* Mine XD

Bloaty hell! Those biscuits ah' four pounds each, deah child!

*freaks and goes for the bucket*

You've save meh life! How must I repay thee XD

*sputters and dabs her mouth with a hankerchief*
I meant four pounds as in a currency, my dear.
Not literally four pounds in weight! *swishes nose knowingly*

But... I'm broke O.o
*hands you the bucket*

*holds handkerchief over her nose*
Um... no, no, you keep the bucket. It's quite alright.
The biscuit is.... on the house.

*takes off hat and pulls out more buscuits for ya*

^.^ Their oatmeal

Iced oatmeal? *eyes expectantly*

Yes.. the best.. FOR the best ^.^

Dear me! *blushes rosily*
I do believe it got warm in here!

Ohmigosh dear, this looks absolutely amazing! Even aside from the vintage sepia look, the whole set-up that you are utilizing with the panel placement and such just so works! And that sepia parchment effect just enhances it even that much more. The story also seems as if it has real good potential, so I for one would definitely advice you to continue with this. I think it can be really popular!

Thanks! I see myself as a total noob with comic set up because honestly, I've never been a comic reader! LOL~
So I'm even more of a noob at this. But I'm glad you think everything lines up well. That's a good sign!> v<)/

Hee hee! Well, even if you've never been a comic reader yourself, you certainly do seem to have a feel for what works, so that is definitely good! In fact, knowing too much about comics could even be a burden, because then you might start to doubt whether you are doing it right, instead of going wih what feels right, and therefore, looks right!

You could of course always put out a few more test pages, to test the waters, so to speak, but I think you are definitely on the right track here! The only thing that I might possibly advice you to do is make use of text balloons for dialogue, or at least put a small 'line' on the text boxes to indicate which one is spoken by which character for easier reading, but what I saw in this page certainly looks very natural and easy to read already

Oh yeah, I will definately clean this up as I do more pages. Any web comic you see out there evolves alot as time goes on and the first and most recent pages will start to look less and less alike as the quality gets better and better. ^ v^)/

Definitely! It's very fun and in a lot of cases very interesting to see how some artists develop their skills over the years as their comic progresses!

*giggles*

So much so, even, that a good bunch of artists get the fright of their life when they look at their veru first comic pages after a couple of years...

I like it :3 should keep going with it.

Thanks! I've done some brainstorming on what this story will become. ^^

I think you should keep going. I like the style you're going for, it fits.

Thanks~ I dig the old fashion look and a story with a werewolf seems to fit. ^^

I like how this looks and the feel of the story itself the colored paper style for the pack ground makes it look aged which is good for the style that you have the characters drawn in. and it flows rather well too. i look forward to seeing more.


on another note...

*drools* seeeexxxyyy kayche *blushes and clears her throat as she composes herself* excuse me. i must appologize for getting carried away there. *she says as she eyes him again. trying to keep her composure*

Eeeeeee! I know, right? He's such a dreamboat. *melts* Gyuuuuuu~
I know I don't act very composed around him and I'm the freakin' author/creator of him! GAH!

*giggles as she helps you up after your melting moment* we must be proper now dear *she says with a smile* melting after looking at someone isn't lady like. *giggles*

Oh dear me. I know... *fans self*

*giggles and offers you a seat*care for some tea dearie?

Yes please, would you dear? That would be marvelous~

*smiles and pours you a cup of her best tea* here you are dearie. careful it's still hot. *she says as she sits down across from you a cup in her own paw*

*hands a saucer* My dear child, put that cup on a proper holding plate while you sit. T'wouldn't be proper for a lady to hold her teacup in her paw!*
*sips tea* So did I tell you, my dear, that I hired a butler yesterday? Smashing fellow by the name of Schindler. He's a siberian Saber Tooth!

*smiles gently as she takes the saucer and sets the cup on it* why thank you. i can't believe i forgot the saucer *sips at her tea* so tell me more about this new butler of yours. *she asks as she looks to you* where did you come across him.

oh and any chance you have time to chat? my internet got cut last time we tried to talk.