Special Collab Sketch Page Commission for  Burned_Out, thank you!

This is the last page of the five orders purchased by Burn, to feature biographies and slices of the life of his Sergal family. All the five orders are fully based on the super-rich, juicy, exciting, and interesting details of significant members of the Sergal family fully written by the commissioner, in order to create pages out of both the character information and Vilous lore.

As I said before, the concept of this artwork is based off of my brother and one of the Vilous official Lore Masters  Coju’s initial idea and sketch. Thusly, this piece is a virtual collaborative effort between me and him!

Thanks to him, I have achieved bringing an artwork with full-scaled character lore that even has a storyline alongside both the original concepts provided by the character owner and canon-compliant design for the official Vilous lore!

📖What the Artwork Tells📖

There are Kipiri and Bengir, children of Nubinara and Baal! This page is spotlighting their time at the academy, and way to go to school~!

Note: The comic is read from right to left, which is typical of manga style literature!

The upper left shot is a moment that they are on the way to school! While Bengir is reading a book to learning things more even on the way to go, Kipiri is naughtily swinging a stick about!

From the upper right to the middle bottom, it's a scene based on the commissioner's original concept: "Bengir is often bullied at the academy where they go to school, and Kipiri sticks up to the bullies and protects him" - In this scene. bullies are bulling Bengir. Because he has a prodigious skill in drawing things but this ability is generally rare as a Sergal race, so the bullies think it weird due to their biased views. Coju, who takes a charge of lore correction help as a Vilous official Lore Master, he thought it could be the main reason that Bengir is often bullied at the academy. Then, Kipiri appears to protect Bengir, and the bullies chose to run away and spat out bad words because Kipiri is strong.

And the bottom left shot, it's a scene that Kipiri is asking Bengir to do her homework instead of her, as was mentioned in the summary of the character profile that was shared in the prior post! XD

🌟 Vilous Lore-Supportive TIPS 🌟

-Purple leaves?

Yes! These colors are common hues of Talyxian plants that are the majority of the flora on Planet Tal looks like.

However, as I have mentioned many times, Gold Ring is one of the few places where allow hosting the precious and rare Eltus plants that feature an appearance that is similar to that of common plants on Earth, clearly contrasting to Talyxian plants. Still, it does not mean Gold Ring hosts only Eltus plants, there are still many Talyxian plants also as roadside plants, except for near the coast of Salt Lake ColVilous. They are, of course, occupied by harmless and friendly species for Eltus people, unlike those in dangerous Talyxian forests.


Again but as what should not be forgotten, special thanks to Coju for the achievement of this, I could never achieve this without his help in both concept sketching and lore-supportive tips!

Now, I've finished posting the all pages starring Burned_Out's lovely Sergal family! We dearly hope you all could enjoy the pages~!

Special Thanks to Drago, who is one of the Vilous official Lore Masters and professional English proofreader! This page has achieved by super helpful cooperation brought by them~! Coju did the first English script on his own, but he asked Drago to make the scripts be more natural for native English speakers, and Drago proofread English scripts for the perfect neat English wordings!


Art by me and  Coju
Character belongs to  Burned_Out
English Translation and Lore Correction Help by  Coju
English Script on the Comic Proofread by Drago

The fictional species belong to the world of Vilous created by  Mick39 and  Kiki-UMA