Ayame8833's (DA) characters. Brush ink pen and lots of fun.
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Human
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 516 x 800px
File Size 87.4 kB
Maybe it's the character, but the back of the man with the braids doesn't seem to match up with where the butt would be. His torso is a bit stunted compared to his legs, and his head is pretty big beyond just being cartoonish...
Actually, it might all just be that the head is too big. Looks kind of like you tried to make their heads the same size, but their bodies enormously different.
I wish we could be perfect every time. That would make my life 100 times easier.
Also, please don't take offense, you are one of my favorite artists on FA...
Actually, it might all just be that the head is too big. Looks kind of like you tried to make their heads the same size, but their bodies enormously different.
I wish we could be perfect every time. That would make my life 100 times easier.
Also, please don't take offense, you are one of my favorite artists on FA...
I never take offence to crits, it's what help people grow after all. Mindless praise I dislike with a passion, so I am happy for this.
And now that I look at it I do agree that the heads are too big. (the butt is where it should be after all, because I always draw out the body before adding clothes. You can't even see where the butt is here because of the coat.)
And now that I look at it I do agree that the heads are too big. (the butt is where it should be after all, because I always draw out the body before adding clothes. You can't even see where the butt is here because of the coat.)
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