nice pic I like the light colors

thank you :) I like using pastel sorta colours sometimes :)

well keep it up it looks great!

nice

thank you ^^!!

You're welcome :)

I really like the eyes and hair... not so crazy about the mouth/tongue.

I will say though that the background is pleasantly peaceful and bright.

Any reason RE her mouth/tonuge?
I was sorta making myself do a more animal-type face, I dont do muzzles that much and was jsut experimenting with a naughty sort of expression on her face.

Well... Ok, you know me, I am NOT trying to insult, so please do not take it as one!

Ok: Her right cheek looks like it is off center or rather it looks like its 'climbing' over towards the left when it should be hidden/not seen as we aren't seeing that side of her face. The tongue hanging out LOOKS cute, but the way it is, it looks like she is lacking a lower jaw slightly.

When drawing muzzles, think of it as a cheek rather than a pair of lips, you're not looking to make it so that her entire face is seen, just what is present to the 'camera angle' you're drawing from.

Suggestions? Perhaps make the muzzle a tiny bit longer and pull back her right side a bit.

TRULY though, it looks fine otherwise! Your art is always lovely to admire and look at. ^_^

I've gone through what you're said but I don't see what you're seeing :s I think it looks ok, but it's a rough sorta drawing anyway so if I took it to inking stage I probably would have honed it a bit. I think I could add a line on to seperate her muzzle a bit from her furthest cheek, maybe that's what you mean x_x

Hehe sorry... I might see what you're talking about tomorrow when I have had a break from loking at it X3

f5 D:!

Hey! Relax! It isn't like you're going to be using ONLY this image for a portfolio or something like that! You're doing a fine job, and I think you get what I was saying. But truly, it is just fine. I'm just trying to give some constructive criticism because you are a true artist and I figured you would want to hear that! Hey, if I wrote something and you told me 'This is rubbish and this is why' I might be bummed, but I would be SO HAPPY to get some info over it! Truly though, she is very cute and I LOVE the eyes and background!

Ooo, pretty. :D

thank you :D!!

gorgeous!! a peaceful back ground and a bad wolf girl.

hehehe she isnt really that bad, just having a naughty moment i guess! :) thanks! x

oooh I like her bracelet. Matches her eyes. =3 Very pretty and I love her eyes. Something sweet yet slightly seductive. =3

:3 thanks hun, I figured it would bring out her eyes a bit X3!

Nice Cute pic...though I think that Marin should get some more face time *sage nods*

All my poor girls need more attention :< Hopefully I will get the motivation to draw more but I am pretty fed up with the heat right now and am doing toher things x-X!

what kinds of things! >.> ALso its pretty damn hot here too, thought the UK was still on the cool side of things in the summer.

It's about 32Celsius today, I hate being hot :< It's also a humid sort of heat too so feels nasteh D:!!

Other things include making jewellery and playing with certain Puddings! D:

But.. But.. you are naturally hot! =o x3

*huggles* :3

Yeah, warm temperatures makes for not wanting to do stuffs x.x

And we're enjoying her enjoying the sun!

That's always a good thing X3 Girls enjoying the sun means we can "share" in their enjoyment eh XD!

beautiful work! :)

oh my... this is so unexpected... what a beautiful, lovely, perfect surprise. ;___; you're so sweeeeeet! *clinghug*

I absolutely love everything here... her face is sexy yet cute, and I absolutely love how she looks with a ponytail.. it suits her so well. :o the bracelet is a nice touch, too. :3

and you know what's funny... I've never ever been to a proper beach. not once in my life... I dream of going to one someday, heheh. ^^

thank you so much for this, hun... you're too kind. :'3 I'll have to try to finish a proper picture for you now! X3;;;

....really, this made my day.

squeee~~~ You're welcome :) your comments are always so sweet and I wanted to draw you something cute, it's no trouble X3
Glad I could make your day better :D Dema is cuuuute :D I didn't know if she has her hair tied up much but I thought it would look cute on her. :)

I am pleased you like it, wasn't sure also about her demeanor here but seems like you are ok with it :D!

She is really lovely, you did a fantastic job with her, for this being a 'rough' piece. =3

MOAR PLZ

I'm loving the bathing suit pictures, I just adore the way they look.