
(A project mixing sfm and paint tool sai)
(This in e621 was highly criticized, I don't know here, what do you think?)
(This in e621 was highly criticized, I don't know here, what do you think?)
Category Wallpaper / Human
Species Alligator / Crocodile
Size 1280 x 720px
File Size 98.7 kB
Very nice angle and use of the Machina's unique coloration to explore lighting, and I appreciate that li'l snapper or whatever the plant is called looks just as eager for the kill as his master.
However, the so-called "edgy sniper" look has been done to death both in sfm and in-game to the point where trying to use it seriously is taken as anything but. (This is the same man who lives in a camper van and throws jars of urine at people, after all. He has to have a few screws loose.)
What might benefit this composition is a slight panning to the right side so that the glowing end of the barrel is in the center rather than Mr. Mundee himself, thereby adhering better to the rule of two-thirds and making the entire image more interesting to look at. Sniper is a long-range class so communicating that by putting some distance between him and the far edge of the frame would enhance that idea.
However, the so-called "edgy sniper" look has been done to death both in sfm and in-game to the point where trying to use it seriously is taken as anything but. (This is the same man who lives in a camper van and throws jars of urine at people, after all. He has to have a few screws loose.)
What might benefit this composition is a slight panning to the right side so that the glowing end of the barrel is in the center rather than Mr. Mundee himself, thereby adhering better to the rule of two-thirds and making the entire image more interesting to look at. Sniper is a long-range class so communicating that by putting some distance between him and the far edge of the frame would enhance that idea.
Interesting point of view about this project, and if I understand that it is a very repeated cliche, but as I mentioned it, it is only a practice project of sfm and also to practice my lighting and shading, to pass it to my drawings, but outside I'm glad to know that you took the time to comment on this thing that I call a project and that motivates me to want to do new things, for the next time I will take into account what I mention, and I will try not to repeat that cliche.
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