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sagabel stories!
The long-awaited sequel to the still very popular story "The Blood Ruby of Kali" (which you can find here: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/36062106/) . The brave adventurers from that story are on their way to South America this time to search for another lost treasure. They will have to traverse a dangerous jungle filled with venomous animals, dangerous beasts and angry cat people! And in the background a sinister villainess lurks, waiting for the right moment to strike...
I loved returning to this setting and story, and I hope you find it lives up to the original.
Story and characters created by me and Sagabel.
sagabel stories!The long-awaited sequel to the still very popular story "The Blood Ruby of Kali" (which you can find here: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/36062106/) . The brave adventurers from that story are on their way to South America this time to search for another lost treasure. They will have to traverse a dangerous jungle filled with venomous animals, dangerous beasts and angry cat people! And in the background a sinister villainess lurks, waiting for the right moment to strike...
I loved returning to this setting and story, and I hope you find it lives up to the original.
Story and characters created by me and Sagabel.
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 169.5 kB
I’m really happy there are sequel stories (and that I’m finally getting to read them) as the first one left me wanting to see more of these characters and see how they develop.
It’s really cool to see Waylon fully embrace becoming Indira and see/read his thought process about the whole thing. Plus it’s also cool to see how the dynamic has switched around. Speaking of which, it’s also really nice to see Louis’s personality more fleshed out here.
Love the introduction of Manolito, especially with Indira getting all blushy. Honestly didn’t expect that kind of reaction from her considering how infatuated Waylon was with Indira herself, but it’s a welcome development.
Speaking of Manolito; he felt a little too good to be true if you get my drift. He was charming and charismatic, but characters like that tend to have ulterior motives in stories like these. That said, I didn’t expect the twist of his true identity.
On that note, another thing I didn’t expect was the twist with the Jaguar men, especially when they stripped down (Bonus points for Indira’s reaction. She’s so dang cute.) All I can say is; hot damn, what a twist!
Finally, it was rather clever to see all the loop holes with the curse. All in all a very fun continuation to the last story. Good work!
It’s really cool to see Waylon fully embrace becoming Indira and see/read his thought process about the whole thing. Plus it’s also cool to see how the dynamic has switched around. Speaking of which, it’s also really nice to see Louis’s personality more fleshed out here.
Love the introduction of Manolito, especially with Indira getting all blushy. Honestly didn’t expect that kind of reaction from her considering how infatuated Waylon was with Indira herself, but it’s a welcome development.
Speaking of Manolito; he felt a little too good to be true if you get my drift. He was charming and charismatic, but characters like that tend to have ulterior motives in stories like these. That said, I didn’t expect the twist of his true identity.
On that note, another thing I didn’t expect was the twist with the Jaguar men, especially when they stripped down (Bonus points for Indira’s reaction. She’s so dang cute.) All I can say is; hot damn, what a twist!
Finally, it was rather clever to see all the loop holes with the curse. All in all a very fun continuation to the last story. Good work!
Thank you very much for this awesome sequel, Lyrissa! It's always a pleasure to see Indira and Louis again, for another exotic adventure. I love how it is becoming a series.
Your writing is always on point, you have a knack for describing and setting up the actions and the atmosphere! From the airport to the hotel to the jungle... it has a very good structure, and great characterization; you can feel the different personalities, such as the villainess's calculating nature and Indira's girliness.
From what I gave you, I love how you developed my elements into something better than I could have ever thought out, such as those extra "reveals" near the end... not unfamiliar with the kind of stories that influenced us, going from Hergé and Carl Barks!
And of course, the very fine skinsuity action that we all know and love... I like how you introduced something extra at the intro, so we have something for many tastes!
Great sequel, great work!
Your writing is always on point, you have a knack for describing and setting up the actions and the atmosphere! From the airport to the hotel to the jungle... it has a very good structure, and great characterization; you can feel the different personalities, such as the villainess's calculating nature and Indira's girliness.
From what I gave you, I love how you developed my elements into something better than I could have ever thought out, such as those extra "reveals" near the end... not unfamiliar with the kind of stories that influenced us, going from Hergé and Carl Barks!
And of course, the very fine skinsuity action that we all know and love... I like how you introduced something extra at the intro, so we have something for many tastes!
Great sequel, great work!
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