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nikcesco, Commission this one. Beautiful bit of work.
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Name: Maleti "Valour" (It's complicated)
Age: Possibly 18... maybe.
Height: 5'9
Weight: Heavyish and for good reason.
Measurements: (Rather fun to take)
Personality:
Fun, flirty, flighty along with being bone-idle lazy and completely useless around the house except for the fun things you can't... quite do among polite company. Everything about her is as complicated as any female I've dabbled with but Letty has the spark that keeps her above the rest and easily makes her the best souvenier I have ever snatched up.
To her anything can become a game, playfulness is the essence of this chica and certainly developed a competitive spark in me. Playing into that nicely is that despite being raised among those who had never touched civilisation, she is fiercely intelligent. Only took her about five months to get a fairly comprehensive handle of the english language, been hassled by that as well since she's easily learned and speaks comfortably more Spanish than I can recall myself. Not good considering it was my native tongue.
History:
Maleti was born to intelligent parents who wanted their off-spring an entirely different kind of life, one free of fakeness and distractions that killed a fledgling personality. Sure going right into the deepest Amazon was overstepping that, cabin in the woods might've worked but I'm not all that fussed I personally adored every moment in that truly vast enviroment... I do mean vast simple terms of bigness fail to capture even partially the scale of the Amazon.
... Went and veered off, meant to be speaking of my chica. Sadly I didn't get to meet her as a Treecko, can't help but think she was a weedy little thing but then evolution hit along with puberty and it hit like a forklift truck being pushed from behind by a bullet train covered in concrete blocks. Took... quite awhile on first catching sight of her in just those tribal rags she still slips on for about the house to move my eyesight and fully grasp her. Then came the shock that she was still fully capable of launching herself from branches and trunks like any good Grovyle... heck having the muscle structure to carry all that might help her out in some way.
At the least her balance is impeccable, with and without the many layers of bindings she used to keep the twins restrained for hunts.
(I was better though, she won't admit it.)
When I met her apart from all the fun and suprise her situation was that of a unique independant woman among a small tribe, typically the women are the slave labour, forced to forage and gather, build, look after children, each other and pretty much do anything that isn't posture to protect territory and have their opinions heard. Thankfully Maleti from being born an outsider and such a capable one was able to choose and change her roles however she saw fit, something she had to show off now and again.
(Good example being, I was her first, but plenty had broken a wrist or more in trying to claim that honour.)
Spent the following months with her just constantly travelling, engaging in other curious foot-work and attempting to chip at a pretty solid language barrier. Original dialect she had was only used among the female half of the tribe and compared to... well certainly not the english and phrase-book swahili I had in my backpack (Yes I know wrong part of the world but I never tidied it up since Bangkok).
Things got complicated with Maleti about the same time I realised just how playful she liked to be when, in getting what I figured was a blessing of the hunt from one chieftan... found out that night at a village wide celebration... that Maleti was now Mrs. Valour. At least we think so, kinda hard to work out the legality around a wedding ceremony where you slit each others palm and try not to hear the Combusken in the shamans hand suddenly getting very high pitched for a few seconds.
(Still beats that one I wound up in at Vegas, that was annulled by the by.)
So yea after that we hit Hawaii... a very, unexpected reunion, more than a handful of uneasy stares and an extra passenger for the rest of my trip. For the curious, in true spark style she hadn't a moments hesitation in leaving the Amazon, though she was suprised at seeing quite so much sky without having to clamber through the various canopies.
To this day she's my my... oh sod it it's Complicated and probably always be even when things finally get simple, sides she says it with such a look...
... Got off-track again. Well at least it's good to know the hooked feeling is mutual.
This is Reiko Valour giving Chicadex entry... thirty two... thirty two really?... dang.
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The tattooed Charmeleon-morph gave a quiet little chuckle, trying to prevent his body from moving the slightest inch, just looking down upon that complicated assembly of curves and fun that was his lover. Claw-tips spreading out, backs of them trailing through that dark brunette hair, so soft and giving... before flexing further out to the long solitary leaf mingling quite nicely among it. No matter how she was, always quite refreshingly chilled, smooth as well and just that little hint of stiffness.
The busty Grovyle-morph making a soft little trill, vibrations of her throat felt along the pale yellow of Reikos chest, eyes upon her still closed but the head brought itself up for mere moments. Her head tilting to nudge it more firmly along her partners toned form, arm drawing itself back so that those delicate claws could trace themselves along one of those large black splotch-stripes at his side. "Must we... move yet?"
"You don't have to do anything chica.", trade-mark smirk spreading along his snout, fingers sinking with such ease into that silken mane, thumb pressing itself so gently along the bridge of the tribals snout. Lifting off as it felt a little twitch and the lavishly endowed female speaking once more, "Good... goes for you too, no moving. Not till I say so."
"Cute little thing aren't ya?", brow quirking itself into hiding behind the Charmeleon-morphs messy spiked hair.
"Always.", another little trill bringing itself up out of her maw as the grass-type soaked up all that powerful heat radiating from her lover.
Still got two more peices to upload of Maleti, if anyones got questions about her or suggestions on what to stick in the comment box do speak up and suggest.
nikcesco, Commission this one. Beautiful bit of work.----
Name: Maleti "Valour" (It's complicated)
Age: Possibly 18... maybe.
Height: 5'9
Weight: Heavyish and for good reason.
Measurements: (Rather fun to take)
Personality:
Fun, flirty, flighty along with being bone-idle lazy and completely useless around the house except for the fun things you can't... quite do among polite company. Everything about her is as complicated as any female I've dabbled with but Letty has the spark that keeps her above the rest and easily makes her the best souvenier I have ever snatched up.
To her anything can become a game, playfulness is the essence of this chica and certainly developed a competitive spark in me. Playing into that nicely is that despite being raised among those who had never touched civilisation, she is fiercely intelligent. Only took her about five months to get a fairly comprehensive handle of the english language, been hassled by that as well since she's easily learned and speaks comfortably more Spanish than I can recall myself. Not good considering it was my native tongue.
History:
Maleti was born to intelligent parents who wanted their off-spring an entirely different kind of life, one free of fakeness and distractions that killed a fledgling personality. Sure going right into the deepest Amazon was overstepping that, cabin in the woods might've worked but I'm not all that fussed I personally adored every moment in that truly vast enviroment... I do mean vast simple terms of bigness fail to capture even partially the scale of the Amazon.
... Went and veered off, meant to be speaking of my chica. Sadly I didn't get to meet her as a Treecko, can't help but think she was a weedy little thing but then evolution hit along with puberty and it hit like a forklift truck being pushed from behind by a bullet train covered in concrete blocks. Took... quite awhile on first catching sight of her in just those tribal rags she still slips on for about the house to move my eyesight and fully grasp her. Then came the shock that she was still fully capable of launching herself from branches and trunks like any good Grovyle... heck having the muscle structure to carry all that might help her out in some way.
At the least her balance is impeccable, with and without the many layers of bindings she used to keep the twins restrained for hunts.
(I was better though, she won't admit it.)
When I met her apart from all the fun and suprise her situation was that of a unique independant woman among a small tribe, typically the women are the slave labour, forced to forage and gather, build, look after children, each other and pretty much do anything that isn't posture to protect territory and have their opinions heard. Thankfully Maleti from being born an outsider and such a capable one was able to choose and change her roles however she saw fit, something she had to show off now and again.
(Good example being, I was her first, but plenty had broken a wrist or more in trying to claim that honour.)
Spent the following months with her just constantly travelling, engaging in other curious foot-work and attempting to chip at a pretty solid language barrier. Original dialect she had was only used among the female half of the tribe and compared to... well certainly not the english and phrase-book swahili I had in my backpack (Yes I know wrong part of the world but I never tidied it up since Bangkok).
Things got complicated with Maleti about the same time I realised just how playful she liked to be when, in getting what I figured was a blessing of the hunt from one chieftan... found out that night at a village wide celebration... that Maleti was now Mrs. Valour. At least we think so, kinda hard to work out the legality around a wedding ceremony where you slit each others palm and try not to hear the Combusken in the shamans hand suddenly getting very high pitched for a few seconds.
(Still beats that one I wound up in at Vegas, that was annulled by the by.)
So yea after that we hit Hawaii... a very, unexpected reunion, more than a handful of uneasy stares and an extra passenger for the rest of my trip. For the curious, in true spark style she hadn't a moments hesitation in leaving the Amazon, though she was suprised at seeing quite so much sky without having to clamber through the various canopies.
To this day she's my my... oh sod it it's Complicated and probably always be even when things finally get simple, sides she says it with such a look...
... Got off-track again. Well at least it's good to know the hooked feeling is mutual.
This is Reiko Valour giving Chicadex entry... thirty two... thirty two really?... dang.
----
The tattooed Charmeleon-morph gave a quiet little chuckle, trying to prevent his body from moving the slightest inch, just looking down upon that complicated assembly of curves and fun that was his lover. Claw-tips spreading out, backs of them trailing through that dark brunette hair, so soft and giving... before flexing further out to the long solitary leaf mingling quite nicely among it. No matter how she was, always quite refreshingly chilled, smooth as well and just that little hint of stiffness.
The busty Grovyle-morph making a soft little trill, vibrations of her throat felt along the pale yellow of Reikos chest, eyes upon her still closed but the head brought itself up for mere moments. Her head tilting to nudge it more firmly along her partners toned form, arm drawing itself back so that those delicate claws could trace themselves along one of those large black splotch-stripes at his side. "Must we... move yet?"
"You don't have to do anything chica.", trade-mark smirk spreading along his snout, fingers sinking with such ease into that silken mane, thumb pressing itself so gently along the bridge of the tribals snout. Lifting off as it felt a little twitch and the lavishly endowed female speaking once more, "Good... goes for you too, no moving. Not till I say so."
"Cute little thing aren't ya?", brow quirking itself into hiding behind the Charmeleon-morphs messy spiked hair.
"Always.", another little trill bringing itself up out of her maw as the grass-type soaked up all that powerful heat radiating from her lover.
Still got two more peices to upload of Maleti, if anyones got questions about her or suggestions on what to stick in the comment box do speak up and suggest.
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Pokemon
Species Reptilian (Other)
Size 758 x 1280px
File Size 73.9 kB
Your attention to the history and outlaying its origins and recreation is very heightened, and her attractiveness is certainly meshed in with her flirtations and affections with her partner in the last portion of writing. I do have a huge piece of advice about the personality section.
Personalities are very difficult to describe to people, it's said that you need 72 or so descriptive words to get a basic outline, and hundreds to fully flesh out a person as believable. This is usually not the best way to describe a person though, so you have to center around the focal points.
The personality's only flaw is being lazy and useless around the house, and everything else is just a grand scale of its playfulness and intelligence. In no way am I saying that it can't be those things, but to have it defined, you need to have near the same number of neutral and negative aspects of their behavior and social outlook.
You could probably flesh that out just by explaining how the, 'complexity,' of her person is complex. The word complex is often abused and although it is usually true, the imagined idea of complex in your head could be completely different based on the reader's experiences and knowledge in the subject. It would be very nice if you went into detail and gave situations where the complexity causes problems, for minor examples.
This could also be explained and covered vividly if you take the history as a framework for the way they are. In general people show, learn, and begin their behaviors weighted heavily from their youth, up until they get older.
Expanding more on their younger days and why and how they are certain ways would do wonders.
The actual eroticism portion is very cute though, but it would certainly garner more emotions with her with a better grasp on who she is and where she came from.
Visually I am drawn to her hips, and her back. A very sturdy looking one, and her lazy calmness shows in her expression.
Personalities are very difficult to describe to people, it's said that you need 72 or so descriptive words to get a basic outline, and hundreds to fully flesh out a person as believable. This is usually not the best way to describe a person though, so you have to center around the focal points.
The personality's only flaw is being lazy and useless around the house, and everything else is just a grand scale of its playfulness and intelligence. In no way am I saying that it can't be those things, but to have it defined, you need to have near the same number of neutral and negative aspects of their behavior and social outlook.
You could probably flesh that out just by explaining how the, 'complexity,' of her person is complex. The word complex is often abused and although it is usually true, the imagined idea of complex in your head could be completely different based on the reader's experiences and knowledge in the subject. It would be very nice if you went into detail and gave situations where the complexity causes problems, for minor examples.
This could also be explained and covered vividly if you take the history as a framework for the way they are. In general people show, learn, and begin their behaviors weighted heavily from their youth, up until they get older.
Expanding more on their younger days and why and how they are certain ways would do wonders.
The actual eroticism portion is very cute though, but it would certainly garner more emotions with her with a better grasp on who she is and where she came from.
Visually I am drawn to her hips, and her back. A very sturdy looking one, and her lazy calmness shows in her expression.
Valid notes.
I'll tackle the personality bit by reminding that it is Reiko himself writing this and he's writing this Chicadex as a future guide in a way. Since every lass is different he focusses more on the easiest to spot parts of the personality, things that would be apparent after just getting to know the lass.
I'm hoping to get a future piece done where I can properly show their first meeting and early time together, since there's a lot of heart-warming stuff. Though there is mention of it in the Gift-wrapped Maleti pic.
I'll tackle the personality bit by reminding that it is Reiko himself writing this and he's writing this Chicadex as a future guide in a way. Since every lass is different he focusses more on the easiest to spot parts of the personality, things that would be apparent after just getting to know the lass.
I'm hoping to get a future piece done where I can properly show their first meeting and early time together, since there's a lot of heart-warming stuff. Though there is mention of it in the Gift-wrapped Maleti pic.
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