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I wrote this on a whim after my own personal experience from going back from Australia to Indonesia for this winter holiday.
I'm quite convinced I didn't really convey what I wanted to convey...I had a surprising amount of trouble from this one.
Perhaps I forced it too much. Regardless, any comments would be welcome.
I'm quite convinced I didn't really convey what I wanted to convey...I had a surprising amount of trouble from this one.
Perhaps I forced it too much. Regardless, any comments would be welcome.
Category Story / Abstract
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 25 kB
Two things come to mind when I read this... 1. Change is the only guarenteed constant in our lives and 2. curiosity killed the cat but satisfaction brings it back.
I must admit that I found the story a little obsucre as if it needs more at the beginning and more at end. This is but a snapshot of a possible much bigger works. I liked it very much. *hugs*
I must admit that I found the story a little obsucre as if it needs more at the beginning and more at end. This is but a snapshot of a possible much bigger works. I liked it very much. *hugs*
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