Woo! :D Glad the rest of the episode finally came out! (: It makes more sense Avis started for good, I like that he sounded so rebellious, but I guess eventually it can seem less rebellious and more oppressive as you go with it for a longer time. Either way, it was nice finally hearing how him and Ham-ham got all started. (:
And I'd think it's for the better Avis got to live on too! Seeing Oxnard remember Faux and convince Tealeon not to make things any worse for anyone was a sad-but-nice lil' spot too. (:
And I forgot how at the end of the first one how she made it possible for Avis to be defeated! It must'a been really tough for her to do, but it was for the better. Not getting a goodbye, I remember, was really awful for her... but in the end things worked out, and now it seems like things'll be better between 'em both too! :3

Though, I guess the rest of the story still has a bit more to go on with before it's all wrapped up! :D Can't wait for the next installment, great work here. (:

And I also liked the named King Mayo. :3

Aye-yah! Looks like my tradition of one whoops per episode continues. <LoL!> This time, it's in my reply, which is listed below. *kushi-kushi* Kazootles.

Better on the outside than inside!

Whoop! This section took quite awhile to put together, but I'm glad I was able to bring everything together in such a way that it all turned out both informative and interesting.

While writing this, I played with TONS of ideas and concepts for how the discussion between Tealeon, Avis, and Ham-Ham would go. Much of which, due to length, I had to leave out. However, I really did want to give a good background to Avis and Ham-Ham while allowing Tealeon and Oxnard to help remind those who may have forgotten, or are not familiar with, the first story.

As for Ham-Ham's role in the first adventure, she actually hurtled her glow-sticks at Avis at the very moment he would've honestly defeated Tealeon. The distraction gave our dragon friend just enough time to take hold of his trusty weapon and defeat the corrupted king. A tough call, but a neccessary one.

Yay, romance and excitement! The important ingredients of any story! ^.^

Yep, yep, yep! You can't go wrong when you tie together so many interesting story elements all at once. Especially when, in the case of Avis and Ham-Ham, it's high time those two came clean with one another about how they really feel.

*Flaps arms happily* At last, it would seem a happily ever after may be in order for the tragic king and his loyal friend. Hurray!

Heehee, you know how I always love a happy ending! And reading your stories, I always know there'll be one in the end! ^.^