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Yay for playing around with meter ^O^
Okay. So, I decided I wanted a poem with varying amounts of metrical stress. <- No idea what I'm saying, but it sounded pretty schmancy dancy.
Basically, this is a great bit of meter (in my opinion) because it shows I've flexible. <- Conceited much.
The main meter would be iambic pentameter-- meaning each line would contain 5 feet of iambic meter-- but in the first stanza, every other line contains:
DUN DUN DUN DUUUUUN.
Octameter! ^u^
I also like how a majority of the rhyme isn't all on you like white on rice. It's subtle. c: Subtle is good.
On a less positive note, I spent about 3 dollars worth for rhyme dictionary apps that I can't use. ene No wi-fi.
Also. I'm not happy with the majority of the second stanza. :/
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This poem was dedicated as a 4th of July present to
gudf56. She's an amazing person and I'm proud to call her my friend. ♥♪
Okay. So, I decided I wanted a poem with varying amounts of metrical stress. <- No idea what I'm saying, but it sounded pretty schmancy dancy.
Basically, this is a great bit of meter (in my opinion) because it shows I've flexible. <- Conceited much.
The main meter would be iambic pentameter-- meaning each line would contain 5 feet of iambic meter-- but in the first stanza, every other line contains:
DUN DUN DUN DUUUUUN.
Octameter! ^u^
I also like how a majority of the rhyme isn't all on you like white on rice. It's subtle. c: Subtle is good.
On a less positive note, I spent about 3 dollars worth for rhyme dictionary apps that I can't use. ene No wi-fi.
Also. I'm not happy with the majority of the second stanza. :/
__________________
This poem was dedicated as a 4th of July present to
gudf56. She's an amazing person and I'm proud to call her my friend. ♥♪
Category Poetry / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 468 B
okkk, Much of the stuff you typed into the author's comment didn't really sink in... Sorry. lol When I write poetry, most of it is random free verse. ...Not that good huh? lol
In anyyyy case. :) You did a nice job. Am I the only one who sees nothing wrong with the second stanza...?
And really? Depression from lack of internet? Do you have a comfortable computer chair? If I did my fascination with the internet may or may not turn into an addiction.
In anyyyy case. :) You did a nice job. Am I the only one who sees nothing wrong with the second stanza...?
And really? Depression from lack of internet? Do you have a comfortable computer chair? If I did my fascination with the internet may or may not turn into an addiction.
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