
Sappy comic is sappy and fail with bad dialogue/story. There's a picture prior to this and it is here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4102166
This is prolly another reason why I don't do comics, or I'm just being negative as I usually am >w> And that last panel is pretty fail.
Recap on the characters, Akari the lion has always been walked all over and picked on and lied to so he never really had any friends, which left him pretty detached from people over time. Usato, his new bunny roommate has tried his best to be his friend and after the fight they had(Usato finally fed up with Akari's attitude) Akari has a breakdown at home and here we are.
Kind of didn't want to post this but well. Oh also don't mind the lame first panel, I really suck at settings/backdrops/backgrounds >w>;
Usato came out so bad in this, cept for panel 2.. and 4.. Akari I like the most in all of the ones he's in cept for the last one. But meh.
Comment if you fave please and thanks~
This is prolly another reason why I don't do comics, or I'm just being negative as I usually am >w> And that last panel is pretty fail.
Recap on the characters, Akari the lion has always been walked all over and picked on and lied to so he never really had any friends, which left him pretty detached from people over time. Usato, his new bunny roommate has tried his best to be his friend and after the fight they had(Usato finally fed up with Akari's attitude) Akari has a breakdown at home and here we are.
Kind of didn't want to post this but well. Oh also don't mind the lame first panel, I really suck at settings/backdrops/backgrounds >w>;
Usato came out so bad in this, cept for panel 2.. and 4.. Akari I like the most in all of the ones he's in cept for the last one. But meh.
Comment if you fave please and thanks~
Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 800 x 1100px
File Size 398.5 kB
writing dialouges is like drawing: practise and you'll get better
Whenever you fell like you fail (you don't, by the way) look at stuff you did some years ago and compare it with today...
*look trough your gallery* and when i say "some years ago" that's "more than 4 years ago" in your case
Whenever you fell like you fail (you don't, by the way) look at stuff you did some years ago and compare it with today...
*look trough your gallery* and when i say "some years ago" that's "more than 4 years ago" in your case
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