I gotta say you did a good job. I wonder what it is that will happen now that the two have returned home though. I have a feeling this "safe" place is a furry convention. Just a guess mind you. ;) I just hope they don't haev to deal with any more drama and mistreating. I think they went through enough of that with the aliens.

Thanks for the feed back! A furry convention was actually one of the ideas I came up with when I thought this story up, but I'm not going to say if it's the one I picked.

alright, though by what you've told me, I'm guessing it's not.

Oh my it continues! The aliens are such retro-jerks. I guess if I had UNLIMITED GALATIC POWER I would be the same way though. I am torn between whether I am happy she survived (the story does get to continue!) or not (that really was such a wonderfully bleak ending!).

uhm feedback criticism. Some of the dialogue with the aliens threatening them is kind of over-the-top when compared with the rest I guess. kind of cartoon-villainish. Which takes some of the danger out of their threats. So there that is my criticism.

Hey, if I could make my enimes fight gaint aliens while I sat on a throne and had two super models fan me, you bet that would be the first thing I'd do!

I'm glad you liked the ending, and at first, I was going to just leave it like that and let people make their own conclusions, but this story has been in my head (all of it, not just that first part) ever since I started. Once I put that fist part on, the rest of it just kept bugging me and I had to go on.

Thanks for the feedback! I realise that the aliens are kind of over the top, but in a way, that's kind of how I wanted it. I'm not sure how to really explain it, but I kind of wanted to express that this power has ruined their intelligence and 'humanity,' becuase now they don't need to think or evolve has a species, they can just blow stuff up. Don't know if that makes any sense or not.

what a fantastic story 10/10 i hope it continues