
And from the votes of this submission http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3577691/ , this is from the 3rd sketch.
Here;s my fursona, Maxallan flexing as seen in the previous random sketches, but I added something extra on him. :P
Enjoy and critiques are welcome as usual. :)
Maxallan ©
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Here;s my fursona, Maxallan flexing as seen in the previous random sketches, but I added something extra on him. :P
Enjoy and critiques are welcome as usual. :)
Maxallan ©

Category Artwork (Digital) / Muscle
Species Dragon (Other)
Size 675 x 900px
File Size 130.5 kB
You know what bothers me the most? It's the zipper mouth again... XD.
Those sketches that I've seen, perhaps you could not make it so straight? I mean, add a tooth here and there and stuff, it looks far better. I like those sketches way of mouth better than this. >.<. Colours... I can't comment much since, you know lah, I'm a wee bit colour blind but I could still see how it blends with the character well.
The BG hor... no variation ah? Like same same black black one. >:3
Bulge on pants is nice and good though. :3
Those sketches that I've seen, perhaps you could not make it so straight? I mean, add a tooth here and there and stuff, it looks far better. I like those sketches way of mouth better than this. >.<. Colours... I can't comment much since, you know lah, I'm a wee bit colour blind but I could still see how it blends with the character well.
The BG hor... no variation ah? Like same same black black one. >:3
Bulge on pants is nice and good though. :3
As in like, the mouth, right, don't make it so straight or some sort. Like have two fangs sticking out at the side there. You look over to your sketches that isn't the middle pose. See the mouth you drew, they have like fangs in between at the outside right? Try doing that though.
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