
This is just a little something I wrote for
Flarestarfire off the cuff, and I thought it turned out okay. I really, really want to add a whole lot more to this, because as a person, a fur, or a musician, he encompasses so much more than these few lines could ever dream to hold.

Category Poetry / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 1.3 kB
This is a nicely written poem, deep and thoughtful and I really liked it. Kinda reminds me of late nights at the computer
The only issue I had is that it got a little hard to read with the lack of spaces between every other line, having to focus so i would accidentally skip anything.
I really liked this poem, nice one. |/=.^
The only issue I had is that it got a little hard to read with the lack of spaces between every other line, having to focus so i would accidentally skip anything.
I really liked this poem, nice one. |/=.^
I like it. It's very inspiring and hopeful, happy with a touch of sadness near the end, then it ends on a hopeful, gently happy note. Hun, you do -great- work, even off the cuff. <3
PS. Sorry i didn't comment sooner, my inbox has been utterly flooded with submissions the past couple weeks or so. @w@ Watching too many people, silly me.
PS. Sorry i didn't comment sooner, my inbox has been utterly flooded with submissions the past couple weeks or so. @w@ Watching too many people, silly me.
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