Nice. You did quite the job with the excellent use of structure and language in this one. Enough to make it catch the eye. :)

Thank you. I also like this one and really do think it's one of the few I've written that have a good flow & structure. I like to think that in Minecraft's world it would be a popular one. I really do appreciate the comment as I don't think anyone under the pic where I initially posted it or in my Minecraft group even noticed it lol. By the way-with a bit of tweaking this would make a pretty good poem about the Iron Giant (not that I'm messing with it anymore lol).

...Or maybe you ARE already messing with it some more in your head, and your fingers are already itching to make it a reality... :P

Nah. I've moved on lol. I rarely ever look at my poems more than once or twice after I've posted it (depending on how many comments it gets). Usually within a day I've forgotten it lol x.x