i love this kind of art

it's very nice, simple, subtle, innocent, I like it :)

Wow ... pencil scratches or not, this is amazing. o_O

Your anatomy is gorgeous here.
I love how you can really feel the emotion here.
Lovely~

There can be a lot of emotion/organics lost in between a sketch and lineart. Sometimes it's very refreshing to see a drawing in its raw form, too. This is such a case!

The minimalist look is very suitable for the subject. The hues are really effective, too, at least to me.

I think the sketchy version is effective enough.
Poor Cas :/ I love the emotion that comes through in your pictures.

She does look pretty pathetic here, ha ha but I am glad you like it even in it's sketchy form

Aw thank you, I am glad it's all clear and effective then! <3

Looks awesome. I this character... great body language in this piece. <3

Thank you, Patches <3 I am glad you liked it :)

No prob. XD And I meant to say I love this character... but for some reason the 'love' part got lost. >_>

I think the lack of color works really well of the emotion conveyed from this and I also think you did a great job on the anatomy of her form, particularly on the foreshortening of her leg for the given angle, the curves of her butt and the structure of her back and shoulders. Her head hanging forward slightly worked really well for the given mood as well.

Great work on this.

Words cannot describe the awesomeness contained within this picture.