Good build of drama for forthcoming events. Every chapter your improving your first person in large strides from the originals. Keep up the good improvements.

9:30 am: Fuck it I'm reading this now come hell or high water all chores can damn well wait. I don't get any time for computing or writing or reading anymore.

10 am: Okay, I've read it, I love. Very generous of them to give Lexi quaters that have a bathroom attached. At least she can have a shower. A short sharp and shinny chapter, I'm so glad to see you write another one.

Quick question in the dream sequence following paragraph, What do you mean by picked the word back up?: "Dyessk swayed back and forth, then fell over and onto the floor with a crash. I tossed the injector down and picked the word back up, exiting the room and locking the door behind me." Or is it just a typo that I can't work out?

*lots a hugs, waves at you and a hi to Em*, gotta go. *hugs*

Damn typos... I meant sword. It was the end of a long night when I wrote this.

OMFGISSABOUTTIME!!!!! *falls over* Ima go read it now lol

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Ive cracked my writers block so hopefully this will get rolling again.

I liked it but it seemed alot shorter than the other chapters

Yar. This is the transition faze

lulz

Arm the 'FAZERS' and prepare to fire!

EYE KAPTEIN!!!! *salutes and pokes self in eye* ARGH THAT HURT