such a lovely story^^ pretty interesting teh way the illusion works around Dusky and everyone else =) really enjoyed reading it^^

nice read!

Thats certainly a different approach than your other stories. But certainly not in a bad way. It's an interesting thing to see Dusky with an other Mommy this time and him freely deciding to become a baby. I really loved the story and I'm looking forward to what maybe comes next^^

i love this story in particular, cause i dont really enjoy reading forced regression (except for most of your stories) so this is a welcome change from the norm! and of course, excellent writing as usual

I read up to the fourth paragraph, and knew I was going to like this. In my opinion, Dusk, you've got a way of storytelling that rivals and even beats, some great authors! I love that you're exploring outside your usual structure; like Haxorus, you're a Mold Breaker.

The way you blend the Pokemon Moves, the Pokemon themselves (Like Dusk and his aura) and a magic system is fantastic. If I had a dime for every time I said "Oh, I love this," for this story alone, I'd have 50 or 60 bucks. Dusk accepting the offer is a flawless moment of character development. You need to write a book someday, buddy. I'd buy it in a heartbeat.

As for the artifact in this story, what would you call it? I was thinking about calling it an Illusory Orb: Child's Play. It'd be an awesome idea for a huge group of Modders, Storytellers, and Digital Artists to develop a Pokemon Mystery Dungeon with the entire community's input. Some of your ideas would be fantastic for it!

It's a relic given to her family from a Zoroark clan, was my idea when writing it.

I'm not sure what I would name it, though. It wasn't meant specifically to be used the way she uses it- but it's able to do that if the user wants.

Reality stories are interesting with how the power of perception twist how you view the world. Great story.

I really enjoyed this. I look forward to reading more of your works!